I absolutely love the ending! Great Job!

It's supposed to be Zack Fair.

LMAO
I wish you could develop the 'scene' more...hahaha I like the humor and the beginning. But really it should be longer towards the end.

This story and threesome pairing is really priceless

So good and funny. Feel bad for cloud and reno though

Ooh God, that was great. The ending was totally something I can see Reno saying despite everything that was done to him. Awesome fic, keep up the great work. _ Ja.

I just loved seeing this devious side of Cloud. He's usually portrayed as a very fragile type during his cadet days, so seeing his cunning brilliance was truly a treat. Thanks much for the fun read!

P.S.- Reno was perfect in this.

Angelwarrior1

great story :3

Love it. Was it worth it? Hell yeah to a prankster. Years later there would still be bragging rights to taking down a powerful person like Seph/

So good. So very good. Oh my gosh, this thing had me grinning throughout! I love evil plots, and this one was thoroughly cunning and nicely executed. Congrats on such an awesome story!

Lol, what a wonderful story. I simply loved it. The way you wrote Cloud was just... wonderful. I can picture him so clearly, his frustration of being longed over, yet having none of his love interests doing anything. Yeah, I can see him take matters into his own hands. And to have Reno help him? Priceless, just priceless.

What a cute story D

Thanks for the read yo!

-Blooming D.

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oh my god i love that last line "priceless yo"

(rofl) AWESOME FIC! Priceless ending. ;) Totally entertaining. And hott. Whew! Loved it! I'm so glad my friend recced it for me. Mwahahaha Gotta love Reno!

LOL