I still love this story! You have such a beautiful way with words!

I was going to review when I finished this but it was night and late and I was tired.

This was an amazing story. I love that you held off right to the end getting themy together.

Lovely idea. :)

I liked the chapter. Though I know how some chapters are really hard to write so I get it. But I enjoyed it. I loved seeing a happy Sarah after her experience at the stables :)

I'm really enjoying this story. I have read a few stories where Sarah is under his nose and he doesn't realise, but they're completely unfinished so I am really excited to read this one. :)

As I read, my mind disengaged from self and merged with the world of your creation. I partook of the thoughts and emotions of the characters as and shared their experiences. First class storytelling. Thanks.

I had read this before but it has been a very long time. When you say slow burn you weren't kidding lol. It took until the last chapter to know for sure how they really felt. Over all a very very good read thank you.

Awesome Job very good storytelling. :)

Wow! I loved this fic so much! This is definitely going down as one of my all-time favorites. Thank you for sharing your talents with us :)

Wow. Just wow. I love this!

Really magnificent story. Well thought out plot and full of wonderful details. I really like that Jareth is a real king, with real duties to preform. I loved that Sarah was under his nose for so long and he didn't know it. You made her a wonderful powerful character without detracting from Jareth. So many writers don't bother.

Is there more to come after this?

Nooooo!, it was so well ended, but wait, is there more?

Wow. I am in awe, this story is so great, so beautifully written! You are very talented and could easily be a successful fantasy writer.

it is so interesting and different from the other fanfics. i love it! thanks!

A lovely plot, holes and all. If you ever decide to continue it and-or revise it, I'm sure it will be quite epic. So much potential in this fanfic-verse of the Labyrinth. Indeed, your writing style intrigues me and I think I'll see if you have other works I may peruse.

Oh pleeeeeez can we have a sequel? This is so well plotted and so well written, I really want to see what happens next! Thank you for writing it!