Reviews for Breaking Through the World
love-warmth-life chapter 9 . 1/8/2014
NOooo, don't stop there! I want to know how to open the gate without human sacrifice! :P Thanks for sharing a wonderful story, I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter! Hope to see more soon :)
janusaries chapter 9 . 10/4/2011
This is really well-written (and I am a "dinosaur" who's been voraciously reading fanfic for nearly 40 years, so believe me when I tell you that your writing is top notch). I am filled with much sadness that you heaven't updated in nearly 2 years, though, and hope that you finish this story sometime.
moon maiden of time chapter 9 . 6/23/2010
OMG THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME. I'm so glad to finally find a post-movie story that involves the original Roy Mustang and Edward. (Most I've found are alternate-reality!Roy.) But, man, is Ross super creepy. I really really don't like him. And EVIL CLIFFHANGER OF DOOM. I so want to know about everything now. Good job on this story and I hope you don't abandon this story!
terracannon876 chapter 9 . 12/26/2009
Yay, update! Interesting, but definitely expected, that Ed doesn't have a mini-Gate in his head. Man ... if the Gate called Ed, short, what would Ed rant against? O_O;

For an OC, Olivia's pretty interesting.

Thanks for the chapter! Hope you update soon~ And happy holidays!
Agatsuma Ritsuka chapter 9 . 12/25/2009
-kicks Mule off a cliff- Kinda curious that he's still alive considering what happened to Alfons and Alt-Ed
Magdalen Beller chapter 9 . 12/23/2009
Wow! Great story, I realy like it:)
qlrk chapter 9 . 12/22/2009
Another brilliant chapter, as always! I really can't wait to see how this turns out! THis is an idea that has been taken time and time again but youv'e made it so we really can't expect what's next. Keep me on my toes, will you? Thanks for writing this! Update soon?
tealtides chapter 8 . 12/17/2009
Bravo!

Another splendid chapter from the awesome authoress, Kaeda-san! XD

Hmm.. That Muller guy is creepy, especially when he changes to his "dark side" uh~

Noo! He keeps torturing Edward and Roy! X(

Lol, I hope they will be able to find another way to return to Amestris without sacrificing a soul, who says the imPOSSIBLE isn't possible anyways? Going to the moon wasn't possible until Armstrong was born! XD
EveningAlchemist chapter 8 . 12/14/2009
Whoa, epic! Funny how Edward can be adorable and temperamental at the same time. I must comment on Roy's counterpart, and how much he is like Roy, but at the same time seemingly more... devious? Of course Roy can be like that too, but Ross brings it to a devilish level! Maybe it just seemed that way to me because as soon as I came to the part where he showed up, my playlist went to Billy Talent's "Devil on my Shoulder"? Either way, I love the epic RoyEd developments, especially since they are so well written. (thank you yet again...)
Mizuki hikari chapter 8 . 12/13/2009
well id muller ever try that with roy, ed and friends can confirm tha he was a family member of muller, since he is older. XD
hanjuuluver chapter 8 . 12/13/2009
EXCELLENT chapter! This made me feel all historically contented and shit. For the past several chapters every time Roy flirted with Ed I bristled and cringed and hoped none of the Germans caught on because dead Ed and/or dead Roy would make me very sad. thanks for addressing that critical bit of history.
qlrk chapter 8 . 12/13/2009
Another brilliant chapter... I'm glad Ed and Roy finally - FINALLY - got together... Stupid laws... You really good at reaching into Roy's mind and depicting it in words. I still want to stab Muller in the gut and then the head though... Hu.

Please update soon!
qlrk chapter 7 . 11/23/2009
This is well, interesting. It's been a good read so far and I wanna see more! LOL for making alter Roy younger, I bet that did piss him off a lot. I can clearly imagine his expression when Ed told him that. The flow of the storw is great too! Although I wish it were a bit more fast paced.

Please continue writing! Us fans support you!
tealtides chapter 7 . 11/22/2009
Holy shit, that Muller sounds like a freaking asshole!

Hahaha, anyway, awesome chapter!
pretend to be a mortician chapter 7 . 11/21/2009
this story is so interesting.

great job!

i wonder if muller will actually tell people they are related or something. i like this story because not only does it have romance, it also has the whole politics and alter world drama.

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