interesting, I hope you continue with it, I like your description of the mystery creature. Keep it up

Hey-

Since you've written a fic about Xanth, I'd like you to come join the Xanth RP that has recently been revived. We're looking for new members all the time, and although we're not even close to being done with the cleaning up and changes to the site, we'd be Honored to see you there

-Ryoa

Well, its a interesting story so far. When does it take place? Is before Ivy and Dor born? Well I like to see where it goes so please write more.