i'm not gay or whatever honestly,& i'm not being so religious too

but damn,back in chapter 2... if i'm being 1 of the campers,it's either i'm going to run away to nowhere or just die on bunk cuz of starvation(i refused to eat anything). the rules are... OMFG i'm almost speechless DX i mean,really bruhh? no watching anything? no (video) game? no mp3? No manga? NOTHING!? Without them,all i feel will be like... . those rules are so wrong in so many motherfuckin' levels yo

and they/u said,that camp is just a oh so 'normal' religious camp,right? but since u show that old asf building naruto has found in the middle of the forest... why the fck i have feelings that that religious camp will be turns into damn human experiments? idk why i feel like that tho...it just that everything is beginning to looks so...fishy/suspicious. even it's getting even more suspicious since the whole exorcism thing...
or maybe it just me who's being paranoid cuz of that doki-doki lecture club game; there's an easter egg novel called 'portrait of markov' about religious camp turns to be a human experiments-... well nevermind TwT

anyway,naru's humorous thoughts and the sasunaru-ness are the only thing that makes me enjoy this. if not becuz of them,idk what will i do... maybe i will do 100 table flips becuz i can't handle those fanatic counselors any longer

and... I wonder if there's anything to do with kurama in this story. hn? maybe he's naru's demon?

Is this really discontinued? :(

update pls im interested with this story! ((might I suggest some GaaNaru action & a jealous Sasuke hihi))

Lovely story so far. The saddest thing is that camps like these actually exist I mean I am a fully fledged christian but the anti-homo thing...anyway loving how you truly captured the emotions of a homosexual teenager in this fiction and I can clearly see the logic behind Naruto's feelings about God and those who flame you are just a bunch of cowards. Remember yall God says 'love your neighbours and all sins are of equal value' meaning that lying to your friends and wearing pants as a female is the same as being gay, just saying

you must be an sad fucking gay freak and let it be known i hate gay ppl btw you think you can even use the name Jesus in one of your sick chapters let alone title you must be some gay ass hole invertervined with antichrist shit hope you die!

Oo

I just want to start off by saying how we 'll done your story is. I first remember reading it back on life journal of all thing's. It's been fav of mine for many year's now amd I have told alot of ppl about it. Im super happy to see it's been updated since I last read it but sad at the same time that it may not be finished. Every chapter really Madeline think about the views of some people and how they feel thing's like this. I offen woulder what would Jesus really do in a situation like this. I'd have to say he'd wouldn't really know what to do or say. But if I did know he say he loves us all every one and in every way there is. This story a danm good one and really opens your eyes to alot of thing's I have to say that I really feel for everyone this story and assume alot to cuz he been dealt such a bad hand like everyone els that's been forced to be there. I hope that some day you fishen this cuz I'd really really love to see what happens next. Its such a good story I'm not one to botch much bit god it's been soo long I really hope to see some kind of ending also I really really enjoyed the old school type of written it just gives it so much more feel then some thing's I read now. Cuz alot of thing's were such a mystery back then to everyone past. And what the character development was. It left for alot of more open iead's compared to nowadays I think. But I love everything I read. I just really hope that some day you'll continue writing this story and Any others you may do or have done. It's been a real joy reading this I hope to see another chapter soon.

Hey, just your average reviewer here. I know, I literally am just that, but I thought I might as well give you my input anyway. I honestly adore this story, and let me tell you, I'm very picky. Often times it's the plot that I lose interest in, or far too many errors in which I simply cannot stand it. Sometimes it's how the characters act, or if I just don't like how things are going. I know, bothersome. But that's just me, I can't help it.

This story though, is simply fantastic. I love everything about it, from the description, to the characters, to how your describing their emotions so that I can actually feel them. I've never been in such a situation, but I swear I get so pulled in by this story that I can imagine it fairly clearly. I know that it's a lot of work to produce writing like this, especially with the plot your aiming for. But I honestly think that you've got this in the bag, and cannot explain how badly I'll wait for the next update.

Your newly added fan, MochiFF

Just wanted to say, amazing story and i acrually didn't know they even had camps like that... I mean, im from Europe, Estonia and we don't(to my knowledge) have anything even remotley similar... I was actually quite shocked,!

Really great story. I love it, I can't even begin to describe how much. Its just starting to get really interesting, so I hope you continue it! Even if it does take forever, I wont just stop reading this story, just saying. I'll continue to wait until its done. Or if you abandon it which would be awful as the story is amazing. The plot is very unique, and while it can be a touchy subject writing this kind of thing, you did a great job! I really do hope you will continue it, Its been way too long already...
Please don't stop writing, many people are dying to know what happens. Its been years. Not cool. your amazing and I need more of this story.

Too bad you never finished. Now every single time I pass a church, I laugh.

Okay, I read this fiction after seeing it in the Sasunaru Awards. And God, this story has enormous potential. I know you put it in hiatus but I swear if you re-read it, you'll realize how amazing it is and how fantastic you can make it. I laughed all the time, the irony is hilarious, the writing is practically flawless, and I really really enjoyed it. Seriously.

really loved this it intense and great.

This story has been on my mind a while, I didn-t have time to read it and now finally I could.
It-s amazing, why didn-t you put Humor on the genre?, Naruto is so hilarious in here,:
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Naruto jumped as another loud roar of thunder echoed throughout the woods. He ran with the other campers, one hand clamped against his neck to keep the make-up from running off his hickey as the rain finally began to impatiently rush down.

It was too humid to be refreshing though, like God was sweating on them.

Or pissing on us, Naruto thought sourly as they rushed towards their final destination
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That line make my day, heck, it made my week! But when I saw the last update I nearly cried, it's been 3 years, I hope when can see an end of this wonderful fic.
It's interenting the topic you discuse in here, and it's very true, many people, the mayority of them religious, see homosexuality like a dissease or a virus, in my opinion that's ignorant.
I didn't review all chapter because I got so into the story that I stop reading it till I finish it.
Can't wait to see the resolve of everything, good luck, and hope to read ya soon.

Diana

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