This is a real shame. i LOVED the first story in this and was doing find until Remus and over angst was introduced. Now I find myself skimming.

This is not a realistic description of the behavior of an abused child. also, Harry is so out of character at this point. OOC from The First Prophecy, that is. it's like the story changed to an entirely dif one halfway through.

i have enjoyed the story so far.. however, I'm not too fond of having Remus thrust into it as a main character. this story should really be tagged as having Remus as a character.

I love that you can admit there are areas you lack in writing and ask for help instead of doing a poor job at it because so far I love art all I have read. Can't wait to read more.

Amazing story ! Awesome work ! Let's go see what else you've done :)

I enjoyed this story. It was original and well thought through. Thanks!

even if I do not like lupin... thanks a lot for the interesting story AND for completing it... thanks for your hard work

working on your request for the '1000' ;-)

this story and the one before it are wonderful!

I loved your story! I have reac both of them in this last week and it wax do hard to make myself stop reading to go to work or sleep. Even when I took a break your story was on my mind. Thank you for sharing it with us readers and for completing it!

Im guessing Harry has never heard gamps law. The book may LOOK like food, but it wont nourish him at all. Like eating paper.

Very well written story, but I would say there is an error in ages depicted. This is meant to be Harry's 6th year, yet he is described as being fifteen, rather than sixteen. I also found that the angst was overdone a bit...there was, simply, too much of it and the impact wore off before the middle of the story. I also did not particularly like the inclusion of the mythological elements. It was a little too fantastical for my taste. However, I did complete this and the previous story to it, so the writing kept me engaged nevertheless.

This is my second time reading this. I must say that I am enjoying it every bit as much as I did the first time.
I find your writing to be very good. Your story is wrote with a great imagination. I can't think of a single negative think about your story.
Thanks for the entertainment.

Slytherins. Every word a test.
A Gryffindor would want the promise, even if it couldn't be kept - the lure of Right and Good far outweighing cold Truth.

I haven't read any of the reviews so I'm not sure if someone has mentioned it or not, but Draco and company were supposed to be 6th years when this started. Harry and co. were too, but in the last chapter you had them in 7th. Also the twins were 7th years when Harry was in 5th. Other than that these two fics have been great! I have really enjoyed them. I love it when I stumble across a great gen fic. The interactions between Severus and Harry have been entertaining and the plot has been delightful. Good job and thanks vor sharing. Bella_the_dark

Great story! Thanks.