Great idea. Please update.

You would think that Ulrich would take this opportunity to ask Yumi how she feels about him, or at least Odd would. :)

Pretty good. . . Keep going, kay? Do something like XANA's attacking, and they have to get out of class, and Yum says somehing stupid but the others keep Aelita quiet. I don't know. . .

POWERS OF STONE! UNITE!

great story. i really like it. espeially about the "lie nerve"

you should somehow get the FBI and the men in black involved somehow and make it such a wreck and then, just as Yumi&Aelita are getting the cure, make XANA attack. or make whatever the damage so bad they have to return to the past. just an idea

and about Herb, I think "Herb" is the American version and either Herve or Herv is acceptable in French

Naomitrekkie

hahahahah please add more its funny

Cool. Please keep it up, this is funny!

Cookies...lol...

this is to fu** funny

I think his name is spelled Herve... but I've seen all 3 spellings.

update soon!

really good

that was Great!

Hooray for another new chappy! I'm pretty sure it's Herb. Update when you can!

Good story!

I beleive that it's spelled Herve, That's what Wikipedia says anyway.

Chapters are short but It's still good

Happy belated birthday and Happy New Year to u to! And who cares how Herb( wa-eva) name's spelt? He's a loser!

~Alex

hey i'm only new to this..but i think i got an idea for you...

in the sleepover chapter you can make it longer by ulrich asking yumi how she really feels about him...

...and also jim wouldn't shrug aelita and jeremy off like that...

get the couples to have more of a convo...what happenes once they get to there rooms? ;)

but the whole not being able to lie thing is a really cool idea!