I love your story especially the reference to Bridgetown Barbados since ironically that is where I am from.

Loved the story. Thankyou for coming back and finishing this story although I am sad that there isn't any more to come.

LOVE IT! Although, I must confess, I'd like more ;)

I love your story! Thank you for coming back to it even though you started it so long ago. So Max and Alec finally got together, yay, it's what we were all hoping for. However there was, I felt, less of a focus on it. Yes there was everybody cheering, and Alec being really cheerful, but not much detail.
I like how you brought in Max's siblings and had a broadening of their characters (thanks for not killing Ben).
I like the trust shared between Max and Alec. I liked the little bits of affection between Alec and Max.
The bit with the X5's with there shirts off was good. I like the way you brought everything together with the move to TC.
The little families formed by the hiding near base were nice. Especially with everyone getting names. Loved the family moments with the units and between the units.
The dark bits where Max was getting hurt, were described well with what was said and left unsaid.
The father daughter relationship between Max and Deck was good. I liked the chain of command being used, but at the same time bent a little.
Very good story I think. Shows lots of promise.
- a Scottish reader

Loved it. I wish this wasn't the end though.

I loved your story! I found the relationships really well developed and intersesting, so were the dialogues! It was kinda tiring and slightly annoying so this nicer Max was very refreshing (Max is a bit of a bitch in the show but not that much!) so thank you for that and this great fic! Can't wait to read your epilogue

I really liked this. I absolutely love Max and Alec, and I love how you portrayed Alec. He's so sweet and caring and patient with Max. I wish I had an Alec I also really like how you portrayed Lydecker. It's actually not that far off from canon Lydecker. Your Deck was a little more fatherly and affectionate, but canon Deck really did care for his "kids". Another thing I really liked was how you brought Max's siblings into the story, especially Ben. Poor Ben really could've benefited from being with his siblings again. All in all, awesome story.

You really have to ask? lol LOVE IT!

Oh my god you updated and it is fantastic. I really like how this ended. This fic it one of my all-time favorite and i come back and reread it from time to time. I have to say you are awesome for finshing it. Thank you for a fantastic fic

all right i now you probebly stoped for a reason but please start again i realy liked this story

Awww, I wish you had continued this! I'm curious as to where you were going with the story. Aaaand we were just starting to get some good Max/Alec action! :)

YOU CAN'T STOP THERE, please oh please for the benefit of my sanity. Continiue. I know it's been years but pleeeeease :DD

Oh, come on! You stopped updating here? You're killing me...

This is an awesome story, please continue writing it.

ahhhhhhhh love it! haha jealous max! funny stuff! oh i cant wait i really love the story! please post more soon! :D

You can NOT do this! You can't just leave a story like this! This is like torture! Pleaseee continue, it's a great story, i love how you wrote Max, and the way Max and Alec interact. Update please!