The writing is excellent, even if the story is not my cup of tea. The author did an excellent job.

Bit surprised Hermione and Ron didn't remember the Marauders map for finding Parvati.

I loved loved this fic!
It was beautiful
Specially a fan of how things weren't drawn out, and Sirius is alive
Sorry Seamus
Great read _

Leakey cauldron isn't in Hogsmead silly.

I like the way you ended it.

I liked pretty much the whole fic, honestly.

Was quite a good read, despite the length. I usually read absurdly long things, but when you're searching for a pairing like this you really don't get much in the way of options. I'm glad for that- I likely would've passed this by if there was a plethora of longer dics.

Really excellent. I like your characterizations, particularly of the lesser characters in the source material- Lavender, Parvati, Padma, etc.

Remus having a wife and kid was sorta odd, considering the instance where that's dropped is one of like four scenes including him, and I think the only one where he has any significance really. I feel like you really glossed of Remus and Tonks just for the sake of pairings.

And where was Sirius in the epilogue? Did I miss him, or was there actually just no mention of him in it?

My only other complaints are that the pacing is somewhat odd. You really glossed over a lot of descriptions, and that's sometimes a good thing, but it left any scene with actual battles feeling rather weak and lacking. Since there's about three of them, this is also a fairly minor issue.

Oh! This has slightly bugged me since I read it originally- silver doesn't rust. You mentioned the Black family silver rusting awhile back. It's probably already been pointed out, but I dunno.

Thank you for this delightful read!

Excellent beginning.

Hindi girl? Are you kidding me? Hindi is a freakin language; one of the hundreds in India. It's Indian girl. Jeesh. No offense, but a bit of background reading helps

Awesome!

An interesting idea. Let's see where you go with it.

Disappointed Harry and Parvati did not name their daughter "Lily."

What do u mean by "Harry and Parvati paid off all their debts?" Harry *has* no debts. The Potters were and are filthy rich.

How on Earth could Rose Weasley he 8 years-old, already? That makes no sense. Ron and Hermione are only 24 and 25, respectively; and, you said they had her at, like, 21 years of age? That's impossible math, lolz.

Magic can very easily heal Lavender's father of his cancer.

I really wish that Luna featured more in this story. :(

Good story. I'm glad you finished it. So many stories nowadays are unfortunately abandoned.

Lol. Solly Parvati. U should have taken ur heels off, yep. Hehe. :)

I'm glad that Voldemort is dead. He was an A-Hole lolz xD.

Grr. I hit post in the last review before I was ready. I ALSO meant to ask, "what kind of joke is this?" Harry would EASILY wipe the floor against Malfoy.

This story just lost all credibility, no offense.

Harry could *NEVER* lose to Draco Malfoy in ANYTHING, *ESPECIALLY* a Wizard's Duel.

I am impressed, among other things, by your research for Indian things.
Quick question, are you Indian?

Tonks and Remus are to very different characters and even though they might be well together they really shouldn't Bond like that they're more friends and people to me so I agree that they belong separated having a kid between them it's just so weird they should just remain friends not hook up thank you for saying it that way