(sniff)

T-Too... sad.. yet beautifu-

WAH! MAKE MORE!

PLEASE KEEP GOING! plz plz plz plz plz!

Your an awesome writer, and I love the story so far!

That was pretty good. I love it. _ Took me quite a while to finish it, with my busy schedule, but that's the best story I've ever read. I really got into it. It's definitely better than anything I've ever written, especially considering I usually never finish my stories/fan fanfictions.

~Bejeweled

Wow. That was long as hell lol

But really worth it!

:3

I like it a lot

YAY! THAT ROCKED!tho it took me 2 days to read it still roked! i wish you'd continue it but you're probably done so, but ifyou makeit into a story you need to have a lemon in it later. even if its just an epilogue it would still b cool. ttyl

I loved it so much...I was very disapointed that it was so short (To me that is). I was hoping for a little lemon, yes yes I'm quite the pervert.

Woo! That was superb! I was kinda sad that Zenko died. Even if it WAS Elk and Kite's bully. I also loved how you put all the chapters in one! Didn't have to get distracted by clicking on the Next Chapter button thingie and author's notes. :3

:hopes there's a sequel!:

x3

Wow, this was a beautiful fic; I read it all in one sitting! I love the conflicting inner voices especially; it adds more depth to the characters, which were very true to their depicted personalities in the game, btw _

The only tiny, tiny little thing that nagged me was the name issue. ; Elk's real name is Kaoru Ichinose. Kite's real name was never given though, so I guess it could still work, but a Japanese name would have been preferable.

But those are minor and irrelevant, lol. Great job!

Aw that was awesome! I loved how you had all the chapters in the one story! It was extremely long and took ages to read, but it kept me so entertained, it was awesome!

Bookmarking this! I can't read it at school, so I'm bookmarking it to read at home.

Amazing story. Simply amazing. Took me a long time to read, but it was well worth it. Great job!

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Awesome.. Awesome story.. I think i have a tear coming down my cheek... You are a very good writer and author. I loved it.. Did i already say that? well Good.. no.. supurb job. :)

thanks for a great story,

Kira

Ah, this was a very good story! Very nice work! WOuld you be intrested in writing a sequel (the after story, posibly involving Yamada's parents as the antagonists, or even just take palce in The World)? Just a thought, you don't have too. Still, very nice work!

KYAH! WOW! This story has now been added to Azzy-chi's Top Ten List of Awesome!

Guardian is such a cute story! It's very well written! Great job! It made me squee with delight! I love the vocabluary you used, and you were very descriptive. I was so happy that you used the word "euphoria" that words can't even describe how much I flipped out... I love you now. "Euphoria" is such a fabulous word! lol XD

YAY! I'm so glad I read this story. It's amazing! I love .hack, I love fanfic, and I love this story! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!

*does the happy dance*

THIS STORY IS SO AMA-YAY-YAY-ZING! XD

Omg!