It good damn hope the sequel has a happy ending with Will and Warren. Also the story had a few laughs but it felt like romance, and suspense more like action and mystery. Love the story

I hate these short chapters. :/ It feels like nothing has happened/ever happens. And weren't there supposed to be five people going on the trip? It would make it more interesting than just having the girls and the couple there.

Hey. Love the story. But was wonderin, when did Zach betray everybody and go insane? What did he do? And where's ethan?

Omg! I bloody love you! You're amazing! And very handsome if the display picture on your profile is anything to go by.

I love me some Warren/Will and knowing it's written by another boy gives me pleasant tingles (in the non-creepy way). Love it!

New Zealand, hey? Seems that we are rivals, Kiwi, for I am Australian. Haha, just kidding, I have nothing against Kiwi's except the way you guys say 'fush and chups'. Actually, now that I think of it, that's pretty cute.

Well, I'm rambling and probably wasting your time. Bye. Good luck with future endeavours.

lol love it

Well, if you wanted me to be shocked. You did it, poor Warren...poor WillT_T

I think you did a fantastic job with this...I just wish you would write a quick sequel. I don't think that, with all of the powers that Will has at his disposal and the amount of contacts his family has, that Will would just leave it at that. He seems like the kind of character to hunt Warren until he finds him, and emotionally DRAG Warren back to him. He worked so hard to save Warren, but doesn't go after him when there isn't a supervillan threatening them? That doesn't seem in character.

Anyway, fantastic job, again.

Hope to see more of your writing soon. :)

:'( I guess I can really see this happening, but I feel so bad for Warren, and for Will. But I feel worse for Warren because he really believes he's making the right decision, feels hopeless, and leaves everything and everyone he knows...

ok thats not fair it over no

I can't wait for your next fic, I always loved your style of writing it's really awesome. I'm really glad you did finish this too, fics that leave you hanging are the worst.

I thought the end would be a little happier but i told you i thought i knew where you were going, and i really wasn't that far of, Muhahah!

anyway, i loved the fic, you need to keep writing , aright?

-ttfn FF x

ok that one made me cry

love it i accdently read chapter 18 before this one opps

miss this story lots i'm glade ther is another chapter up

Ah! Warren, no! But Will to the rescue ... along with the rest of the Superhero community. Any more today? LOL

So the showdown is about to begin...can't wait to see it. Warren, stop trying to take the burdens of the world on your shoulders