I really love this. Jack's anger, fear and guilt are so palpable. Truly enjoyed.

Kinda dark. Whe... Jack is such a deep character, and you grasp it so well. This was dark and kinda scary, but it expains a lot to me. Good job.

kara

But not forgotten! This was really good, Jack must have been thinking something along thee lines when it happened! Spot on again, hehe. :)