Loved the Dasey road trip and how you had them visit all the well known places in each state. Derek going to Museums and monuments to keep Casey happy and her taking him to different sporting events really showed how they were trying things the other enjoyed because of how much they liked each other. Derek secretly collecting the charms for Casey gave me butterflies. I think when Casey broke up with Derek that it was more about her being afraid when they started telling people rather than Derek not wanting to go public as he seemed all in. Loved the happy Dasey ending, great story.

This chapter was adorable. I love playful, flirty Dasey. Your doing such a great job with the descriptions of each state that they visit, I'm loving it.

Just thought you should know that from London to New York, you don't pass through Toronto. If you do, then you're going the wrong way.

Sorry, can't keep reading after that.

I definitely thought Casey had snapped during their car ride. I couldn't believe she chickened out but I'm very glad how you ended it all.

Nicely done!

'Being so high above everything felt powerful.' - I thought Derek was afraid of heights or did he get over that?

Poor Derek, Casey's being unfair to him.

Yes Casey DID make a mistake by letting Derek go!

I thought the gift giving moments for the siblings was adorable.

Great road trip story.

Damn it! Why does Casey have to be so complicated. She should just be happy that they accept them!

Damn with the ending! It's like the tv couple Derek saw all over again O

I wasn't expecting those two to be a couple. Wow.

Oh I love this chapter!

Finally and I love how they are together D They are perfect!

That talk show was a sign! Love it that Derek made a move! At least she didn't yell at him.

The sailing couples thing was very adorable.

I wish Casey didn't freak out the way she did the last day in Philadelphia.

Looks like you have Derek's need to avoid school pegged.

Loving their internal thoughts D

I'm surprised that Casey got Derek to go to the library and the museum with her.

Derek's gift is so cute. When will he give it to her?

Is Casey's dad in NY in this story?

Amusing to have Derek overhear Casey saying that little false introduction.

I really like how Derek 'analyzed' the photo of Casey and her dad.

I still think they are in-character so far (well Derek's willingness to help was a bit off but everything else seemed perfect).

Great first chapter!