Its been ten years.
It actually hurts to say that lmao because I've absolutely little to no hope of this being finished anymore BUT this was a great story while it lasted. Just know there's at least one person still sort of waiting for the ending of this story 3

beautiful chapter of toph showing her feelings in her mind. i like the way you have written toph, still as her hardened core and stiff personality, but deep down we never really know what she feels inside, and i like the way you have captured that. onward to chapter 2 i go.

This chapter is my favourite and I keep coming back to it over and over again. Actually I just love this fanfic and it's one of my bookmarked favourites whenever I need some Tokka in my life. I'm glad the author is continuing this fanfiction :D I was really sad when another awesome Tokka fanfic got discontinued and I'm just glad that this story is still being updated :D

aww I love it! I hope you can update soon :)

omg plz do ore cant wait for mare plz do more

Sooo I've read this again and again fell in love with it and AGAIN think it's high time for an update, don't worry I believe in you and you ability to write!

I had started a story back in 07 and just as recently as a couple weeks ago, got the second chapter out and then tonight a third one! So I know it can be done. I had the entire story written out when my computer crashed and couldn't continue and then lost all inspiration and hope but I watched Toph video's on Youtube, read Tokka stories and did everything and anything I could. I reread my work until one, my hands started to write the second chapter, I was barely thinking and it pretty much wrote itself! And I loved it c; there have been times I've loved it gone back and completely changed it but hey, as long as we keep going!

You have such an incedable talent and I miss this story so much, it has soo much potential and can go anyway if you just try and even if takes longer, I'm still waiting for the update. I wish you the best.

Hey write more will you thanx lots I hope u do write more

i don't know about you, but i expected Toph to have the "gorgeous laugh". i mean, it was one of the ways Aang was able to identify her, right?

anyway, nice story so far!

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Truely a work of genious, I hope you continue this work of art, I would love to finish it, and you could maybe make a sequel

omg...i hope you update soon coz i really like this story ]

Wow! Amazing story! Please update asap!

See! I read your story! XD!

That must be hard for leaving a story in hanging after a year on hiatus... XD.

I don't see any problem with the plot, you just made Toph crossed to make everything interesting... *smirks* good story. Too bad that I'm not into Avatar... XD

Nothing like a drunken stupor to aid in feelings of love and commitment.

"Follow the Blur!"

YAY your back I missed you!

anywho now for some criticism you did make some miinor generic mistakes. but other then that I say good job. I enjoyed this chapter and I am looking forward to the next one!

luv allways

AND YOU KNOW THIS!