This was funny! It was a nice pick me up! I hope to enjoy more writings of 21 jump street from you :D

Five and half years after publishing I find it. For some reason my interest in 21 Jump Street got a jump start and your story caught my eye. I really enjoyed it. I've always loved Hanson and Penhall's relationship. It's a great story. Thanks for sharing. (It's also nice to read one that's complete.)

T. F. Crosby

Hehe. I love the interaction between Doug and Tom - and poor Tom: he had a visit from the infamous Candy Thief. :)

I decided not to review every chapter. I do have to say you are one hell of a writer, I truly wish you still wrote. This story was touching, exciting, the banter was fun and it was just filled with everything. Excellent

Oh boy Fuller doesn't know where they are Tom didn't have time to tell him. And now Mark found him, wonder what he was doing out or if he saw someone leave the house. Oh and the punishment, that doesn't sound good besides the horrible food. Sue

They better get out soon and not to avoid cleaning the bathroom..lol...Boy you do great banter between those two. I love the flirting...lol...that was funny. Sue

I do think you write wonderfully but you are right in the first person your descriptions and very different. I can see the difference.

This house and these people seem like the Stepford wives...lol..I wonder if they'll be able to get out of the house at night. Great job. sue

Boy Tom really gave it to the guy but he needs to act like that, suspicious of everyone. Doug had me giggling with his complaints and then cutting off Hanson to say they were going before Hanson had another wise crack to say.

Really could feel the cold and the street area with how you described it. Sue

love your descriptions of the homeless yet sick people and how Penhall can't handle it. Tom did a great save when the old man said they weren't from around there. And when the old guy said that the priest would probably take both of them and they're lucky I wonder just how lucky. Sue

Boy I just love how you have them banter so well. They are so in character you do a terrific job with that. Sue

aww! the candy thing was cute. loved the story. keep up the awesome work!

21 JUMPSTREET ROCKS!

Awe man, this was the most amusing chapter. I loved it! the whole thing was awesome!

Now all you gotta do is finish the other one! *lol*

I'll let you have Tommy...

and sepor...

Note, read that last word backwards!

I wouldn't mind being in a closet with Tommy...yummy...

Well, at least he had a whitness to the whole thing. Now he can't be charged with killing a person.