god this rly escalated quickly shxbsjnsjs

I'm so glad you did a second ending for this. My biggest hate in the whole show is the L gets killed so I love it when someone writes an ending where he lives.

It's nice story.

Good job!

I just found this story and wanted to let you know how amazing it is! I could barely stop reading because it drew me that much in! I loved the way you pictured the characters as well as L and Light's developing relationship and inner turmoils. I really appreciate all the effort you put into this and love the second ending! A very beautiful ending to this great story! Thanks for writing and completing this!

really great ! the two endings were a good idea ! a big BRAVO ! and so well-written. I think the characters were quite well-written and described.

Hello, sorry, I just started reading Death Note ( esp LXLight fics) and stumbled upon your stories. I could really felt this is a great fic. I even cried myself for the both of the ending. Well maybe not too much for the 2nd ending, though I like it better at the end. But somehow the 1st ending is captivating except the end not so. But anyway, thanks for this great fic you created for the us readers to read! Maybe, I might came acrossed some of your older fics later on because I planned to read some fics according to the number, I can't be sured about it. But if I do, I could still give review, comment or my opinion, can't I?

Please! *puppy eyes*

Anyway, sorry about this lateness of infatuation to LxLight, I don't know whether you still wrote down or not, but if you do, can you make another tear falling stories but of course, having a happy ending or an alternate happy ending to back up.

Thanks again!

Sincerely and gratefully,

Seishirou Hitsugaya

Very convincing. Minimal mistakes... However, Ryuk is OOC, he doesn't speak that way. Good job, i applaud you endlessly with eternal hands. (i rather prefer the second ending, however unlikely it may be in comparison to the plot and style of the original.) Quite good, quite good... I feel as though I shall forever think of Light and L in favor of one another, in the sort you have stated.

Love ya.

So many time skips! I enjoyed the story but I was confused most of the time due to little explanation and rushed details. Specially the part where L gives Light a laxative to shit himself. :p Was he cleaning him out so he could take him? Cute story

hmm, i'm not sure i like your writing style. it just doesnt seem to flow, for some reason. not to say that your writing isn't good! though it's a common premise, i'm sure your fic is awesome. maybe i'm just not used to your style? idk, lol

This is the best fanfic ive read so far!

I personally love the 2nd ending but the 1st one is amazing too, it made me cry :P

Awesome job...Keep writing

:)

i really liek this story i def prefer the second ending tho l dies in the first one tis sad l should not have died in the show it totally sucked lol

Ohmygod, this was AMAZING! I was horrified when I read the first ending, but after reading the second I calmed down.

I think I'm gonna stick with the last ending: it was so cute.

I actually loved this fic so much - great job! :D

YES.

I remember reading the ending of Chapter 20,

and I thought, "is that it?"

And I'm glad that it was not the end.

I was so happy this morning when I recived the email

saying you updated.

And happy once more, when this final chapter was uploaded.

You, this story, and its character has come a long way.

:]

The last few paragraphs were so heartwarming, and made me so happy.

Light and L are the cutest couple.

And an odd pair.

*hugs*

Congratulations on finishing this story!

XD

Oh my gosh.

It has been a LONG time.

And this was really sad.

T-T

But thank you for updating it.

:]

ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER ITS 2009 AND U STILL HAVENT FINISHED IT IT HAS BEEN 2 WHOLE YEARS!

UR A BAD WRITER KEEPING UR FANS WAITING LIKE THIS U BETTER MAKE A NEW CHAPTER OR IM GONN FLAME U SO BAD PLZ GOD THIS STORY IS SO AWSOME U NEED TO FINISH IT OR ELSE HOW COULD I LIVE WYSELF FOR NOT KNOWIN WAT HAPPENS NEXT?