This is one of the greatest twincest stories there are. Dark, romantic, poetic and a fitting end. I love this and Another Side

' I realized I forgot to review this...good! Hikaru's a meanie!

poor kaoru. but at least it is a happy ending. :D

I love it . It's really well written. Thanks! D

THAT B S7ARD!

AW! That is cute/sweet/touching/awsome too! I love it! :') :'D Once again, very well written! :)

~Fishi~

It was fricken' fantasmical! Gwah! So sad! :'( So very very veryveryvery sad...:'( and yet sweet at the same time...:') Man, You are really, truly, very good at writing. Kudos to you for writing such a beautiful peice. :)

~Fishi~

this was a great fic. Sad though, but nice. keep writing!

aw that was amazing and realy cute. you did very good. i liked it alot

It's good. In a kind of. I'm not really sure what happened in the ending kind of way.

Dude, you have, like ONE fic in which there isn't angst. WRite some fluff, it'll do you good.

I like this Hiraku's one better. I think because I hate reading about how people like Kaoru (or Naruto) just don't realize that they deserve better.

Jeez, this is good.. no, great.. nah: PERFECT

adorable...

col! very good .

I loved the beginning as the first person point of view. May I suggest that you write more stories in that point of view? It was great.