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Interesting writing style! Was very nice to read, and I liked the thought patterns with their jumbledness. Thank you for writing and sharing!

Wow, I love this! This is very interesting.

This is a wonderfully written piece! Thank you for sharing and I hope you right more season 0 in the future. :)

Awesome story.

te apoyo con el tipo de reloj dio miedo

I need more affection than you know , you know I read this story years ago and I just know noticed you wrote some sentences backward

Oh, it's hard to find such a well-written story about the season zero setting. I liked it!
Keep up the great work,

Yumi

LOL! I thought the Season 0!Yami was downright creepy, witty, evil, and sexy.

I was constantly ranting about the fact that most of the time, he had a smile on his face. It was creepy just to see it.

DON'T EVEN GET ME STARTED ON THAT WATCH GUY. I was staring at Yami like WtF when he was walking away with the watch. I think I said something along the lines of:

"Yami, you're fucking walking away...from a guy who's turning into a clock...with a FUCKING smirk on your face. I don't know why I think you're sexy, but that...was...just...what the hell."

And then...when Saadi entered Yugi's mind and opened Yami's door. I screamed and shouted:

"REALLY YAMI! YOU JUST HAPPEN TO BE STANDING THERE? YOU HAVE FUCKING GLOWING, RED EYES YOU CREEPER! YOU FUCKING SEXY CREEPER! CREEPER!"

Needless to say...I was and still am scared of Yami, though I do admit that his penalty games have changed from close to killing everyone and anyone, to just witty things to trick people into insanity or feeling insecure.

Love this fic, because it just reminded me of everything that scared me of Yami. :) Something definitly worth faving.

Wow, this is strangely... Cute. .w. I dunno how.

But, do you plan on continuing this? 'Cause it doesn't say "completed"... Just wondering. .w. I'm gonna add it to my watch list anyway, just in case but I'll remove it if this was simply a one-shot deal. :)

This was really well written, you really pulled off season 0 yami perfectly, slightly crazy lol. Little yugi was perfect too. Awesome job :)

Amazing ;D pure amazing...

All I can say is: Awesome. Pure awesome :D

I love how natural Yami and Yuugi's conversation was, and how you managed to keep them in character (Hard to find that nowadays, lol)

Season Zero Yami is amazing, btw XD

Wow... This is one of the best stories I've ever seen for the YGO fandom, especially my favorite season: 0!

My gosh, you got the Yuugi AND Yami of this season perfectly! *U* You gave them a sweet meeting and interaction, too, and that's one of the things I love the most about it. Besides, even if this is INSANE!Yami, you gave him a very gorgeous human side to him, especially with Yuugi, and I ADORE that! *U*

This is absolutely gorgeous! *U* I really don't know what else to say this, but gosh...this is BEAUTIFUL! *U* *U* ROCK ON! *U* *U*