This was great. It displayed many aspects of their relationship, and I enjoyed it very much. Lovely work! :D

I'm reading your collection of fics, and twice now I've thought to myself, I should put you as a favorite author, do so, and then get the result that you're already on it. I swear, I love your writing more with each story.

Okay this is just a fantastic piece. Seriously. I'm not a huge RikuxKairi fan but it's just...so well written. I definitely want to see ANYTHING else you write. Good day/night!

Lovely. There needs to be more OT3 love like this. 3

I really enjoyed this, I haven't seen many good stories with sorikai and finding this one was a pleasant surprise. I like the way you get a hint of what's happening in their lives and the interactions between Kairi and Riku were really lovely.

Eventually, I hope Riku becomes secure enough to let Kairi actually say "I love you".

I wonde how Sora will manage not to notice that anything is up, since it sounds like Riku's injury looks pretty bad.

Well written! Wonderful piece.

Wow, with a line like 'He grinned, recalling the way Sora struggled with it indefinitely until Kairi sighed and unhooked it herself.' I don't think anyone could delude themseleves to thing that this isn't a sorikai. Heh, this is pretty cute. I'm kind of sad Sora doesn't really appear but the mentions are delicious.

I really like their characterization. Kairi is really convincing with her playful yet insistent nature and Riku is just... well he's Riku and that's the point. He's all pride and sweetness.

Um though with the numerous mentions of sex i think this should have been rated T, or maybe i need to big up a K book once in a awhile. What are they teaching our children? hehe

I think your writing is very nice a coincise you write oneshots very well.

If you like reading SoRikai, (and i know these can be hard to find i try myself all the time) i'm writing one at current. One Word, Three Hearts. Just in case your curious.

Your fics kill me with their utter perfectness and the way that they portray all the characters you write. Kairi was utterly wonderful here, complimenting Riku and the relationship between the three of them (even that which is unseen) is great. Wonderful work~

Aww, yay. I wish the sorikai was more drawn out though (with more sora in it), cause i heart sorikai. Who cares if people get squirmy about the idea? XD Anyway, good stuff.

Ohmygoodness, this was wonderful. Kairiku, no matter how hinted at. And I've been craving Sokairiku, too.

The writing is novel and captivating, and yet the description is not overdone, nor is it lacking in any areas. The beginning certainly was gripping - albeit a little awkward - but that's what made it so good. I absolutely love Riku and Kairi's casual speech. Not forced at all, and in character - with a little more fine-personality-toning to make it interesting, humourous, and yet still realistic. Bravo.

( And I just looked up your profile and saw that you had written one of the stories on my favourites list, ha. So of course I already praise your writing. )

.x. Constance.