It's good! But it feels a bit quicker paced than the original.

I noticed you haven't updated in a long time, but I really hope you didn't drop this story, it's creepy and suspenseful and decently written, one of the few stories I read because of the style and characterization, rather than character pairing. Definitely gonna favorite this, and follow it!

That bedroom scene was good, you definitely got Bill's psychotic yet sexy character down perfect. For some reason him keep calling her Lizzy adds to the creepiness and tension.

Oh shit! Such a great chapter! You definitely got the skill for writing suspense, I was literally on the edge of my chair, face 5 inches from the screen.

Headin' to the next chapter!

Because I love Nikolaj, I'd love more Liam lol

This story is so cool! Found it just the other day and I can't wait to read more!

Paul did Bill so magnificently good and your story does that fact justice, hope for more soon!

wow full on. great writing cant wait for the rest of it. keep up the good work:)

The story line is good. The narration in first person is awkward at times, and I think most of it is the use of tense.

In this chapter in particular, I think it would be more effective to have Liz out of the room. Afterall, why would her brother listen to the bad guy more than his sister? It would make more sense to have not sitting next to the two of them for that scene.

And, you must update! I have to know what is going to happen next! I've seen the movie several times, but how does Liz fit in? What's going to happen next?

Have you given up this story? :( cuz i really like it.

I hope you will continue with this story, cause i really like it! :) so please please please continue!

like it

i love it! update soon!

Please please please update! I'm literately on the edge of my seat! lol ;D

but i beg of you, please update.

And I'm am always up for helping ! :)

I love love love this Fanfic :D Firewall was an excellent movie and the bad guys were my favorite characters :P Bill especially, I can't tell you how glad I am to be reading this and thank you SO much for making it. I will be waiting for the next chapter and hope it comes soon! keep up the great work!

please write more please

Great Story! PLEASE keep on writing it!