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I want the promised cookie!... and this totally cute story! :3

that was so cute!

ah! great!

james is perfect!

well done :)

really great. because really, we can all dream about the perfect guy; the perfect personality, perfect looks, perfect manners, and on and on and on, but truthfully, that shouldnt be what a person is looking for. it should be someone who can make you laugh, who you love being around, who compliments your own quirks and personality. because thats what its really about. not this dream about the perfect guy.

wow i just kinda blabbed on right there. but yeah, great job

Aw, that was very sweet! I really liked it! The only problem I had with the story was the fact that some of the punctuation in the dialogue was incorrect. Other than that, I thought your story was great!

That was brilliant. So much emotion in one little story! I'm jealous now!

Well done

Cuba

very nicely done. A bit confusing a times, but a sweet story none the less.

Well, I haven't read enough Lily/James stories to know if this was cliche, but it was certainly enjoyable.

You've done a spectacular job writing both Lily and James in this scene. They are both belivable and incharacter (as far as we can tell) from the books and fannon. You've really made the progression of this scene make sense.

This is really good writing.

(coming to you from the Reviews lounge by the way... :D )

Lol. I liked it.

FM

that wasnt all that cliched... the part about lily and her perfect boyfriend that she was bored with was, but i havent read any stories that put your spin on how she changed her mind about james. it was good. i liked it.

You’ve never cared if someone perfect really. You may wish to change this sentence by adding an is or a was to it. Not that I should be talking since my current fic is a horrible mess. Your story does not seem cliched at all.(How did you get that little apostrophe thing up there for that word?) I also liked the way that you put author's babble in there. It was a very refreshing change.

I never thought of perfection being not-so-perfect. Very interesting idea and I loved how you explained it in the dialog. Really well done! And don't worry-it's wasn't cliched with the different take on perfect relationships.

-PurpleArmadillo

m that was just... perfect.. lol. i mean, spot on right about having to work for a good relationship. and crooked kisses are never bad either! loved it, so cute! i have a few new fics too, btw (just incase u want to have a look) anyway this was so sweet, keep up the good work! xx - Lexie

very good. i love it. very sweet.

*claps hands enthusiastically*

Hahahaha.

Yay.

Me likey lots and lots. :D