Reviews for Learn to Dance
Jazzy-Reader35 chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
This was written amazingly, and it brought me to tears. Great work.
emthebloody chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
That was beautiful and you did an excellent job with Parker's POV.

It was heart-crushing. I'm crying right now.
the 85th writer chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
I like the premise, but it seems slightly odd that Parker (a boy) would want to dance with his father...

And you make him sound quite small. In age I mean. If you think about it, it would take a few years for our resident idiots to get together; and given that Parker is sixish, he;d be like 10 or something or atleast 8-9. And I gather that losing Booth would be a traumatic event in his life, but your Parker sounds like he's no more than 7 or something.

It was still a well written story,though OUCH Booth and Brennan!
Aisho Ren chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
That was so sweet and so sad.
lovesbones chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
that was an amazingly moving story, it made me cry! brilliant read
VampirateLycan chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
You actually made me cry. Oh my God that was so sad. *stops to wipe tear* *sniffle*

But good. :(

:)
hollbets chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Wow! What a moving story. I had tears in my eyes at the end.
Lorelei of the Sea chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
*sniffle* that was so sad and amazing! you did a really great job of portraying a family dynamic and the relationships between all the characters. Will there be a sequel? -Lor
ashleigh1890 chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
that was the most beautiful bt tradgic story i have ever read. i still have tears as im writin this review! keep up the wonderful writin you have real talent.
iron woman chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
definitley a good story! loved the idea of Parker's POV! hope that youll write more soon!
Abi chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
wow.

I just read this story, against my better judgement.

NOT, because I thought it would be bad or anything(!), but because I don't usually read sad stories.

But I am so glad I read this story, because it was gorgeous.

Amazingly well written, and beautiful to read.

It literally, brought (more than one) tear to my eye.
btvsfifi chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
That was so sad! I like that it's from Parker's POV!

Fiona :(
jekodama chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
It was really touching and sad. But I have one question: How old was Parker when Booth died? because he sounds really REALLY young in some parts, like a five year old, but I assume this story is set after some years, so it confused me a bit.
elsa chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
Cute story, with interesting point of view. However, as one of those people who is ridiculously picky, I thought you should know it would be impossible for Brennan to adopt Parker unless Rebecca signed away legal rights to him. In the US children can legally have only two parents at most. Also, in a prior episode, Booth said that he has no legal rights to Parker. In all likelihood, only the mother's name appears on the birth certificate and neither Booth nor Brennan are eligible for recognization as Parker's legal parent. (Interestingly, Canada just recognized the possibility of a child having more than 2 parents (a lesbian couple and the gay sperm donor who all agreed to share custody) but I really doubt the US will follow that lead anytime soon).
boothandbones90 chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Aw so sweet and sad but good!
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