I just read everything in one sitting cuz, man this was awesome. I really love how you fleshed out that period of time and I loved seeing everything you altered—it really felt like stuff that could have (and should have) happened.
I know it’s been forever but I wanted to let you know I really enjoyed your fic.

I can't decide what I think of all Jackies games. She is playing games and to me that's getting to a point to where what she is doing us no better than Steven cheating after a misunderstanding.

Aw, I need to keep going! It's just freakin' good! And I'm off to read the one lonely chapter that's left!

Awesomeness! Another chapter down! I really love how Jackie punched out that guy. I nice little homage to the Veteran's Day scene. And the making out part was hot with the perfect amount of angst. Off to the next chapter now!

HippieDippie

Another long chapter that flew right by! Awesomeness! I'm freakin' happy Jackie got her own room, I always wondered about that. I adored the big talk between Jackie and Hyde. I usually always agree with Hyde during this point in time, but you gave Jackie some really valid points. I'm really looking forward to seeing how it all turns out.

HippieDippie

I'm adoring this fic ten times better than how the break-up was handled on the show. I never got how Jackie had Hyde & Kelso battling each other over her love. Nothing gets Hyde off the hook for what he did but her wishy-washy behavior didn't help anything. It just proves to Hyde that Kelso really is a threat to him. Which means he's never going to trust her and Kelso around each other. I think what you wrote is a bit more realistic in how they would have acted and handled things. It's beautiful and I'm looking forward to reading the rest!

HippieDippie

Oh man, that was a long chapter but worth the read. First thing I have to say: Awesome. Only Fez would be that happy to marry Laurie. :P I love that you had what happened when they decided to get hitched. And the rest of the gang's journey home, holy crap, I was hoping Jackie would beat the crap out of that farmer chick. What did she think she was doing? NOBODY GETS HYDE BUT JACKIE! Yeah, JH is my OTP. AND, Hyde's zen was annoying/funny. He still doesn't get it. It IS a big deal. Dumbass. :( Damn. Anyway.

Oh yeah, it was nice to have them get to graduation. :D A nice change in canon. Liked this whole chapter. Now where's the JH hotness?

Oh man. Right now, I'm loving your version so much more than the original. I adore it. In this 'verse, Jackie isn't crazy enough to actually think about going back to KELSO. That made no sense. OH YEAH! And I adore that Jackie defended him on the driveway. That was SUCH a Jackie move. Cutest JH moment, when Jackie walks next to him, and they touch. I was all 'squee' there. I could just see it. It was really romantic, 3 3 3 :D

And your writing is beautiful. It flows really well. And, you write Hyde really well, great voice, totally IC. Awesome. I love how pissy he gets when he and Jackie aren't together. Total Hyde there. Yeah, and it sucks I have to stop reading for the night. I'll be back tomorrow. I MUST READ ALL OF THIS I CAN. I get so addicted to these stories. I also compulsively review every chapter, so be prepared for that. :P

- Hippie

Dude, I thought Hyde was going to beat the crap out of Kelso. He should have! Nice first chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more. :)

Your LOTR dream sequence had me rolling! Let's see, I accept your challenge as a fan of Led Zeppelin. Other than Misty Mountain Hop, The Battle of Evermore references LOTR...hmm...I've always heard Ramble On was about Frodo hanging out with the elves, but I'm not sure. And don't hobbits smoke weed? I don't know, have only read The Hobbit and Return of the King. I wrote a chapter in my fic about Hyde enjoying LOTR because of their Led Zeppelin connection, too! Also, I love that, unlike a lot of J/H authors, you include the ensemble and give them things to do that don't involve Jackie or Hyde, like Red and Kitty discussing Laurie. About time they did! And Eric is certainly going through a lot, conflicted with his desire to start out on his own and live with Donna and be an adult or stay at home and help the family (which is ironically the adult choice). Well done!

I don't know where you're going with this story but I really do think you made Jackie very vindictive. I understand Hyde cheated and needed to pay for it, but I think she's handling in such a underhanded way, it's making matters worse. She's in character, but I wouldn't blame Hyde if he did the same thing that he did in the show. At least she drew the line for Kelso.

But I do love the story so much! I hope you find the time to finish it!

Best wishes

Thank you for this update, missed you on fanfiction, great way to torture Hyde !

I like this idea and it would be great to see more of this story! I just hope Hyde doesn't pull the same kind of stunt he did on the show when he was sick of waiting for Jackie to come to a decision.

I really enjoyed what I've read so far and I hope you update soon!

I love love love love this story! It's so perfect, exactly how things could have (and SHOULD have) happened :) I also really liked the LOTR sequence, that was pretty hilarious. Especially Legolas Kitty "I don't know," said Kitty using her elfin eyes..."-best line, I was laughing for like 5 minutes. Great job with it, and please please please update soon! I need a happy J/H ending!