Excellent story with an interesting plot! Really looking forward to reading another chapter at some point :)

Will there be more updates? This is by far the best, most realistic cross faction romance I have read as yet, I need more!

I've been following this story since 2007. I finally checked today after a long while to find two chapters I hadn't read - this story you are weaving is a great read. I really hope you haven't given up on this story, I sure haven't. Can't wait for the next update, I hope it comes soon :)

I love this story. I believe that you will be able to complete it. And I'll wait to read it ) It's very amazing one.

Oooooohhh mannn, there goes my night of "doing work". Spent some time reading this whole fic from beginning to end and it's probably one of the most captivating and well-written stories out there. Minus the occasional spelling errors, I really can't point to any flaws. I particularly like the two perspectives of Valzul and Azshana and how they seem to kinda blend together towards the later chapters. Some creativity there with "Edwed" and despite his utter creepiness, I very much enjoy his character.

I totally know what it's like to write, especially when busy with school and such, but a finish to this story would be very nice at some point :) Please please please don't leave this story unfinished.

Thanks for an entertaining read. I usually hate myself for staying up late to do stuff unrelated to school, exams, and other such things, but in this case I daresay it was worth it :)

Best,

- du Tapis

Oh noes, Zeenjen! Don't eat Azshana! What a terribly climatic chapter to end on! But I am patiently awaiting the next chapter. You take your time with it.

And in regard to sections/points of view that aren't interesting as others, I think you have done a great job with choosing what to present and what to elaborate on. I did find Azshana and Valzul's "reunion" with Edward a little anti-climatic, or rather there wasn't as much emotion (fear, anger, etc.) from Val and Azshana as I would have expected considering all the crap they've gone through because of that guy and all of the frightening things he has done.

But other than that, I think you are doing a fabulous job!

A good chapter! My curiosity with Deephoof continues to grow and I am really coming to love him as a character. He seems so deeply hurt and trying to prove something to himself more so than to others. And the ominous human was...ominous. I'm sure his brief description isn't all we are going to hear from him. On to the next chapter! Hope your writing is going well.

I think that I can say with definite certainty that I've never enjoyed another fanfiction quite as much as I've enjoyed yours.

Your descriptions and fight scenes were extremely well done. I've fallen in love with every single character-even Edward, who at the beginning of the story I hated. But you've developed his character in such a way that he's begun to grow on me, and I have to say that the strange feelings he's having for Azshana excite and confuse me. Will there be some jealousy between he and Valzul? Maybe that will fuel their next fight, much more than the thirst for revenge.

Deephoof and Zeenjen, too, hold a soft spot in my heart. Your characters have come to life. They don't mesh into one another after a while like so many stories have them do, but they retain lives of their own, and different personalities, and I read every sentence of their little subplots.

There's just something so satisfying about reading your fanfiction. I can't explain it. I do hope you update soon, though. I can't wait to see Valzul and Azshana's romance develop more, and how Edward will feel about this. I also am excited for a confrontation between Zeenjen and Valzul. So many things to look forward to!

I don't have any concrit at this time beyond a couple simple grammar or spelling mistakes that were probably just typos. That said, keep doing what you're doing!

I love this story.

Finally, I have time to read again! I have been so behind in this story and I am glad to have some time to catch up.

Ugh, Edward, I continue to love-hate you. Great villain, truly. I think he has to be my favorite so far, though I do like the orc investigator as well. It's like CSI: Durotar, hah! Good work!

Wow, and I mean wow. I really do love Troll/Elf stories. Being a grammer nut this story so far is Superb, character development was well done no jumping right into romance very well played out. I can't wait for the next chapeter so dont delay!

New chapter, goodie! Keep at it, you're bound to finish before you die. :D Good work here. I can tell you've put a lot of thought into the structure of the Druidic society. The furblong chase was kind of exciting. Still waiting for some resolution between Valzul and Azshana. It's been too long since I've read the previous chapters, but I don't remember them ever discussing the nature of their relationship. Are they going to get around to this eventually? I'll be checking back in a week or two!

hey!

i'm still reviewing hehe

excellent update, not sure if i have reviewed before, but i have been reading since day one :)

keep it comin and great to see some update

Another chapter to the story. Please update soon. Can't wait to read more

IM GONNA FIND OUT WHERE YOU LIVE A FORCE YOU TO UPDATE A NEW CHAPTER!