I like it, it got some wit mixed in as well.

This was hysterical! finish this Kayla!

Wow, this is very good. A lot better written than some of the ff's on here. can't wait till the next chapter

Well this beginning is rather entertaining. I laughed each time you trashed Monica’s mother; pretty funny stuff. Sounds like Ms. Young is somewhat of a cynic. That’s cool, she probably was. I like how you’re starting off writing from her perspective, something the show never really did. She seems a bit wilder than in show as well. Although she did flash Ben in the first epsode. Looking forward to more.