Reviews for The Pupil
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
Very good,thanks
Dino-Rogue chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Hahaha! This is sooo Edmund. Too bad he got sent to the principal's office anyway... Oh, well, guess that's part of being a boy again; and now, Edmund Pevensie, King of Narnia, The Just King, Boy from England, shall thoroughly enjoy it.

"Classes were challenging to Edmund and this was simply because they were not challenging." Haha! That is so right.

Love this!
Commander Ael chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
D'awww~!
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Cool.

-Dyslexic Nerd
blueyblonde chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
i love it
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
That was cool, I can so see Edmund doing that
CN chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Dear Arhazivory,

Thank you for writing a story that so resonates.

I shall probably leave another review once I have more time to muse upon your short. However, it does, in a fashion, encompass the nature of both Edmund and Narnia.

Thank you.

Your Reader,

CN.
zebrasdancing chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
nice i like it
Eve Royal chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
'laughs' That was hilarous, even though I know it wasn't meant to be. I could just imagine that poor, poor teacher... Hee hee hee hee hee...

Wow. That was great. I love the Pevensie brothers...

-Eve
Skinny Little Nobody chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Absolutely brilliant )
Kay chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I kind of want to create an account of my own so I can add this to my favorites list. )
Ilada'Jefiv chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Great job! Poor Edmund! I would die before I did school twice around. Blessings! ~Ila
Ceville chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
I really enjoyed reading this.

It hit every nail on the head, so to speak.

One tends to wonder how one would re-adjust to life as a normal person after being a monarch for so long, as well as returning to a child-like state after being an adult.

You kept Edmund well in character, I loved the ending line the most.

A job (VERY) well done.

Favourite's list?

Most definitely!
xxkoffeexx chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Very nice! It's interesting that you chose to focus on the untouched aspects of the Pevensies' lives after their return. One certainly wonders how they adapted to the sudden change in lifestyle (and worlds!). And I enjoyed reading this-Edmund is a great character, though you probably love him more than all of us. XD I'm glad you wrote this... so I could read it!
Belle'srose chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
Aww that was cute. I love Edmund and have often wondered what it would have been like for the Pevensie children to return from Narnia. Good job
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