As for the question in chapter 20, yes, Ao, the Mizukage's guard could apparently see the green color of Shisui's Sharingan in Danzo's eye socket.

This chapter made me laugh & cry (cause' the last time you updates was 8 years ago)! This is a beautiful story and I'm sooo sad it's ending :( Thank you for the smiles 3

you know what! I don't care when you update or if you never update. You brought me a lot of joy with what you shared and I always enjoy rereading it. Thank you so much for creating such amazing stories. We're absolutely blessed to have gotten to read your work. wherever you are, I wish you health and happiness. 2020 is a wack year so I hope you're safe!

This is very good, wish there was more. The first part of this story gave off Anita Blake vibes.

Please continue, why? Because this is a very good story

Little kids are so stupid, their rude statements made me laugh. They could only dream of the abilities that the Hyuuga and Aburame possess.
"Troublesome" was copyrighted by the Nara Clan. That seems legit, haha.
This chapter had me on the edge of my seat. This summon was presented as so mysterious, and then as so very vain! It was a refreshing adventure.
Hold on, did the moth call Hinata "ugly"? That got me so confused I had to read it thrice. WTF.
I adore what you're doing with this lovely friendship between Shino, Kiba, and Hinata. It's friendship goals. They make me smile.

Yes, we can call them fillers if you'd like. They do feel a lot like character development, however. And I enjoy them pretty much.
You got that on point, this Hanabi really feels lifeless. That's what I get from her whenever she appears on any chapter.
This chapter felt personal. Just as little Hinata, I have a special relationship with cemeteries. Actually, I've been paying them visits since before I was born. I didn't lose a mother, but my mother did lose someone. Over time, her lose became my lose as well. Your words were sad but kind. They felt true.
Tora can't deceive me, he's already wanting Hinata to become his summoner. (We all knew this was going to happen, haha.)

I had to take a small break because life happens.
I could see little Hinata's growth on this chapter. I'm loving Shino's inclusive behaviour. He's a lifesaver.
I also love your Tsume.
The signing of the Wolf's scroll was action packed! It was amusing to read it. I think you way of writing it was clever.
That last scene, the one about the dinner at the Inuzuka's was cozy. I'm happy that she's finding something to belong to.

Yes! Tora is warming up, haha, he's so cute.
I had forgotten about team Kage as well, I mean, it seems like I forgot the whole thing but the concept of a Summoner nin.
I can't wait for the next set of adventures.

I'm delighted at this sweet Kiba / Shino moments.
The Hokage is getting little Hinata hooked up on sugar, hahaha. I foresee a potential Anko-like cinnamon bun addiction.
Our girl is now a genin!

I know that feeling. Social interactions are scary. BUT I had been waiting for this! I really enjoyed Tsume and Shibi's passive agressive show at the school doors. Hinata is so awkward and cute, befitting of a 9 year old.
Our girl is in love, haha, that silly Naruto. However, did you really think this as a NaruHina? You said you wouldn't disclose it. You should spoil me with an answer about the pairing you planned, that'd be the loveliest thought (I'm a confessed multishipper, and the story is so good and the romance is not something I absolutely need, that I'm fine with anyone.) Please do tell me!
Hinata loves through sacrifice. I can't judge her for that since in my heart I understand. I hope someday she finds out that loving herself is alright.
Haha, catching up? She's so worried all the time! I mean, it's part of her charm but someone please tell her to take a breather!
P. S. Never worry about canon (I've been there), it's pointless. It all took a turn around from what it used to be years ago. Just think of the story YOU want to tell. You'll be surprised how many people are more interested in your words than in your respect for the original plot.

Damn, this was hurtful to read. I really appreciate the way you balance the chapters. Some parts fluffy. Some parts painful. But it's the pain what stucks the most. You did an amazing job portraying Hinata's distress when returning to the Hyuuga. They are all savages and I pretty much dislike them. I could feel the coldness. It was suffocating. You had me cringing the whole time so... well done. Thank you for the warm gesture from Hiashi near the ending. Everything felt very human.
I think Hinata is the prettiest one, it doesn't matter how she perceives herself.

Hahahaha, I certainly did not take Tora for a calorie counter. I'm liking Tora and I want him to warm up to Hinata soon. I'm a cat person.
So the adventure ends. I understand Hinata's pain for coming back home (a.k.a. the place were she's abused and miserable.) It's hard.
Tsume and Shibi were my favorite, lightening the mood by flaunting their sons. That was hilarious. I came to love them all. They have such a compelling energy.
It was all bittersweet. Let's read what's to come.

The plot thickens! Poor Tora; for a second I thought of Itachi, but it makes way more sense to think of Nagato.
Dearest Anko and her blowtorch remain as my favorite part this chapter as well. Everyone should get a blowtorch at some point of their lives.
Finally, lovely Hinata is on the right path.

Well, that was an awkward question.
Anko with a blowtorch was epic.
Jiraiya is hilarious!