good story too bad you never finished it

You crammed to many things in this chapter that it felt subpar and actually kinda unreadable.

that's ridiculous, let's assume ion can't heal, which i'm fairly certain with the right knowledge and creativity he actually could absolutely do, but assuming he couldn't, it would still be in his power to remove a tumor/cancer.

a goauld with s spy on tollan?

god you are a moron. no i dont have limits, then next line, no i cant stop this ship.
ive read many bad and sloppy stories but this one is def in the top 10

yeah lets not kill the judge just yet cant have the canon all fucked up

to much yapping to little slaying

researching who the green death is, you've got to be kidding nobody is that stupid

you get a free pass tonight spike, but if i ever see you in this town again ill kill you.
so aslong as he is killing ppl outside of town it is oke? or is this to preserve the plot...

you too, you two. what is this a new boyband...?

We only kill mass murderers in a fair fight!

Pfft, please. The ION cannot be so easily defeated.

John Stewart once modified a medicine into something that would cure a plagur in the imbiber and make it where anyone given a blood transfusion from that person would be cured. So, the freaking ION definitely could have healed Ford. If only by enhancing Ford’s own natural healing.

I wish I had read the reviews before I started this. It started out interesting but then you make such glarin mistakes. What's the point of giving Xander powers when he is powerless in your story? I know this was written 7 years ago so meh, but it was a big disappointment when Xander is basically braindead in this story.

This story needs a little work developing plot points.
First, he kills Kendra by mistake even though she looks nothing like a vamp under aura sight.

Then, he let his dad keep beating his mom 'cause... apparently a revelation or two makes that okay in his books. No need to devote any more words on that. Just walk out the door to the next trainwreck.

Now we get those garbage excuses with disposing the Judge's limbs. I get it. You're trying to create problems for a character that can fix everything by snapping his fingers, but you can do it without making your protagonist look like a braindead toddler.