You riffed on the Pixar short Paperman, didn't you?

I really like your writing style, I hope you can finish this fiction because I love it very much!

Hey, isnt chapter 20 (kiss 04, way 29) basically wrote along the plot of "Paperman" by disney?

After rereading your story. I just remembered the same scene from a doujinshi.

You know what, I felt exactly the same way with the doujinshi and your story. It was a very good continuation.

Chances are this story is dead, so don't hold your breath

Excuse me im a big fan of your work and i was wondering if you stopped making these or if you are still working on one. I've been waiting for awhile now and i'm really worried. I don't mean to sound mean but its just i love the stories you wrote about my 2 favourite characters of all time, from my favourite anime. If you stopped could you maybe send me an email. My email adress is , don't judge me, I made that email when i was really young.

That...was interesting. And it was good.

Im not sure how this comment thing works but I just wanted to say it was great. And i don't understand what the AN meant cause i thought there were 30 ways. Anyway good job hopefully another story will appear to make my day.

Years have passed since my last review and my last read of this story. Its still one of my favorites after all this time.

This was a rather fresh and sweet take of a new chap! Correct me if I'm wrong, but was the Disney short film, 'Paperman', an inspiration for this? If so, you added a very well fitted essence of the norm Eva AU to it. If not, I recommend you watch it for obvious reasons. I am however curious, what do you mean only more story to add? No 30 versions/30 chapters anymore?

"Not a Zombie" - are you sure? I can't really tell myself, I sure feel like it sometimes. ;)
Anyway, another great idea here. Loved how Asuka went to haunt him more for shit and giggles rather than just going full guilt-tripping on him.

So, it continues. I'm so glad it does. I haven't read this 19th kiss yet, I'm saving that for bedtime. I just wanted to say I thought this was pretty much dead, I stopped checking for updates a long time ago. I was just seeing what was new on the first page and I found this new chapter. I hope it means you'll go all the way with the 30 kisses, if you write them I'll read them, that I can assure. It's been 18 so far, tonight it'll be 19.

Oh my God, much better. I really liked her finding him and Shinji's dumb stuttering ways! Nice.

Why did she leave and then come back at some point? It's like it's incomplete...

Boy, you do have a very nice writing style. I've only read two of these but I can tell. Very nicely done. Like omake's with a common point.