I loved your story. I laughed so hard with it and the adventures were so exciting!
The point in which you left the story was fine. I mean I would be happy to keep reading but I think I am happy at this point of the story too.
I would like to share some of the things that was expecting to happen in your storyline. Like, I thought that the girls would teach the other elves their style of fighting, in particular to the elleths. Also, all the time I was worried about Celebrian's capture and didn't happen, but I would have guessed that the girls would remember about it and try to avoid her capture, since it is something that I would risk changing from the future of middle earth, since it is just too cruel and sad to let it be.

The adventures that you write are awesome. They always get me excited about what is next!

love it! Is there going to be more?

Awww, that’s kinda fast. I kinda like the fact that she’s a man tho and would like to keep it that way lmao. But it’s a good fic amd idea nonetheless, great job!

Hey nice story

I came across this and I saw you haven't upd in ages. I thoroughly enjoyed it and would be grateful if you picked it back up and continued it.

There means location, think "here" and there
Their means someone's belongings, like "their dog"
They're is a contraction of "they" and "are" so it means they are

Other than that, its a good story

Oh I like it! You wrote such an interesting story so please continue writing it! I hope you haven't forgotten about this!

Beautiful. I liked it. Though it'd be nice, I doubt you'll write more. So thank you for what you wrote. Hantanyel, herinya.

i love this

Love this song!

That was one of the best stories I have EVER read! Please keep writing!

*Happy Sigh* Found this story again after a few years! I really enjoyed reading it again. Took me back a few years when I actually had time to read more! I had to write a paper on literacy, so I choose to write about Fanfiction and literacy. And of course, I mentally snuck off to go find some good fanfiction to put me in the mood for that paper! Haha :)

I know life might be crazy now, but it would be pretty cool to read more! Eventually, at least. Hey, only a few more weeks till summer! (Though for me, this will be the last time that technically matters since I graduate for the last time in June! Yay!)

You are such a nice auth0r(without the grammartical err0r) y did u st0p writing?

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