Reviews for Dreaming |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this before and it's still as good as I remember |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy fuck that was fucking amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should write more, but next time maybe include haruchi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kyaaa! X) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfectly written! 10/10 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Kaoru was written so well omfg good gob |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best freaking incest twin lemon for Ouran HSHC ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! Best hikaru x kaouru lemon ever! Awesome and hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Dominant uke and twincest, for double the win! |
![]() ![]() Yooo that was lovely to read although this is my what? Third time reading this? But it's still fascinated |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm shivering all over right now... That was positively amazing. Amazingly written in a first person perspective, and creating enough emotion to make the reader shudder with pleasure. Very well done... |
![]() ![]() Hot. Damn. That was deliciously dirty, and wonderfully intimate. Especially since it was written in first person, present tense. It felt real. Like it was happening to me, right then and there. And because I'm such a pervert, I loved it. Kudos. |