Oh my god, this is amazing! In crossover fanfictions like these, they usually make one side much stronger than the others. However, you make it so that they are both equally dangerous to each other! I'm so glad you did that. Thanks for writing this book

drinking age is 18 in England. If Neji was 19 then shika is 18 was he was 1 year behind him.

Also they can drink as young of 16 if an adult buys it and an adult is present when drinking

Seriously, LOVING this! *pumps fist* SHANNARO!

Well, if you haven't updated in 9 years then the story is more then dead and readers really should realize it by now. But as they keep PMing you, it simply means their all brain dead! GEEEZ! How many times do you have to tell them " It's dead Jim! You grab its' tri-corder, I got its' wallet!" I wonder if they'll ever figure it out for themselves? :-)

Isn't spiral something along the lines of Uzumaki or something? No? Just me? ...don't mind me...

HELL YEAH, IT'S DEIDARA TIME!

*LMFAO's "I'm Sexy And I Know It" plays in background*

Ah... the joys of terrorist hotties with no regard for human life... Heh.

Honestly, I stopped reading half way through this chapter because I was so confused:( I realize you probably explain it later in the chapter but the whole thing was giving me a headache. I mean, what happened to Deidara? Whats up with Tobi/Madara? Why is Kakashi being a bastard? You probably have some sort of complex plot in place that I cant understand. So the point of this review I guess is just to inform you your story is well written and probably really good, but just too damn confusing for me to read. Sorry.

Nice job, dickcheese, on starting a story and then abandoning it. People like you can suck a fat, long, mayonnaise-covered, disease-infected wang.

Lolz Bad Faith. Mau foi. Malfoy. Lolz

If your not prepared to finish a story don't write it.

This is brilliant. It's too bad it's been abandoned.

I hope you're still writing though, the stuff you come up with is great.

Update what about the first group?

SPECIAL REVIEWER OMAKE!

It's shame to stop an excellent story. Oh, well. Lovly plot anyways! )

Geeze this is good. Really, really good. I love all the elements in your story, and how you keep them in play. YOu also have suitably twisted plans for Shikamaru to use. That is great.

I also like your story telling style. It can be kind of hard to follow sometimes, but it all works out in the end.

For such a wonderful writer, it is such a shame that you have abandoned your amazing story like this.