Reviews for Crack of Dawn
alleluiamagiatsuioku chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
I love this so much
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This is really well done. I love how you wrote these really hard weeks for these characters. The thought processes and dialogue were all perfect and flowed really well. Bravo.
pleaseforgetthisaccount chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Very nice, it's really splendid!
TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
awwww, thishae such a bitterswee feeling to it. I am very happy that Fai decided to live.:D
fayfan chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Great fic! XD It would be SOOO AWESOME if you could continue it! ;D
Geellaa-Green chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
wooow! it's a great story! :D I love fye, and even more as a vampire! xD so, I really like your story! I couldn't believe how fast I got to the end xD
Bottan chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
I can't believe how astonishingly beautiful this was... Omg, this was wonderful. The plot came out well, the main persons were in-character and the angst was just right. I love this to death! x3 Thanks so much for all this work you invested, the story is wonderful! :D
keishicherry chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
This made me cry. And it's bloody hard for a fanfic to make me cry. You, sir, are amazing.
PersonalLegend chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
This is really good! Great characterisation and writing style. I'm adding this to my favourites!
Violet Crow chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
Oh...wow! From the first word to the last one it was really awesome. Seriously. You've got a great writing style and...I don't know how to call it exactly...sense of all these small things that make story so alive, like words or gestures or looks.

It felt so real, and so filled with all aspects of their situation (if my words make any sense, he-he).

And I loved that here Fay and Kurogane were so close but not like in most stories about them.

And I just adore the last part. The piece "The food he made was sweet and sticky, just the kind Kurogane always said he hated most but grabbed extra pieces of when he thought no one was looking." was so warm )

One of my favorite fics now))
hgjk chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Aw, that was absolutely beautiful.
Vampire-to-B chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
i love fai too much for my own good...

gret fanfic.
reckless-rage chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I really like this story! *delighted* I've been searching for KuroFai since I finished the second season, and this is the first really nice one I found. :3
saxgirl42 chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Oh my goodness, I LOVE THIS. You captured everyone's character so perfectly, and I never really thought of how hard the whole blood-drinking situation would be for Fai and Kurogane because, well, CLAMP doesn't deal with it as much as they could. (Not like they need more angst, anyway, but still...)

Wonderful job! Thanks for the great read!
eStHeR-tHe-ScRiBe chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
WAH! WHY DIDN"T KUROGANE KISS FAI? Great job otherwise! :D

Love, Esther
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