Enjoyed this one too.

This is the third time I've read your story. I LOVE the scenario, and Tony's unfailingly heroic efforts to have Ziva's back. Gosh, I would freaking love watching them combat danger like this on the show... Anyways, nicely done and even the third time around, it's an exciting and enjoyable experience!

Oh, I loved this so much. Really excellent.

"That's right." He nodded, maintaining eye contact with her. He'd never realized how much time they spent staring at each other until they couldn't.

- truth. Beautiful truth.

So i read this story maybe a year ago and i really liked it but i never added it to my favorite list or reviewed and then today i thought about it again and tried to find it...it took me like an hour to find it but i'm glad i did because it was just as good as i remembered it! especially this part...

Water closed in over her head. She managed to bob above the surface once, twice before the effort required was too great. The taste of brine stung her mouth. The flickering lights on the surface were receding. Don’t inhale. Don’t inhale. If you try to breathe, you die. You can’t breathe. Don’t breathe. Instinct would win this battle, but she fought it with her remaining strength and consciousness, both of which were fading fast. Don’t breathe. Don’t…

“Breathe, dammit! You can’t do this to me! Breathe, Ziva!”

um yeah that was pretty much perfection. infact, this whole story was perfect! thanks for writing it!

They're all great-I think this is my favorite so far! Thanks

oh that was great! the ending was beautiful! loved the drama, the action of the bomb and then the gas explosion. disoriented ziva was very good...liked her sniffed tony's neck and not making much sense...and loved the conversation about "not worth dying for." really great piece!

aw, that was so sweet

You do Tony and Ziva to perfection!

I read a massive amount of fanfiction and most of the time it is horrible, but you have some of the best stories I've read about NCIS in a very long time. You actually understand the characters, and are able to channel them into your stories. Seriously, you are one amazing writer. I hope you keep writing NCIS fanfics because I will keep reading them.

Your story is just great, as usual!

Thanks a lot for posting it!

Aw, that's so cute. I like it a lot. ]

Im not really a shipper, but I liked this. Not that it's not obvious the two would not be concerned about each other in times like this, but it IS a nice change to see concern instead of the good humoured bickering.

What a beautiful story.

Aww. Tiva - yay! That was great. *claps*