and you have the same thing in both chapters because?

Hahaha, cute! )

HAHAHAHA! Adorable. )

lol so i guess we shouldn't be drinking out of the cartoon anymore yuh?

omg so fluffy i love it! i would love to get into a kitchen fight with the boy i liked! awesome job.

xoxo,

lyllian c.k

AW! Awesome Kurttyness! I love the cracks about her cooking and driving! Also how you describe how Kurt truly feels. The way you wrote this it made me feel as if I was the character and I applaud you for that!

Ok that is cute! I love the play on the episode and the messing around afterwords. Very good characterization and plot!

So funny and adorable!~

This was very cute and funny, and just about perfect. Actually, it was pretty perfect, but if it's perfect, you have nothing to shoot for, right? I loved it! Kurt and Kitty in a food fight is endearing, and awesome.

Aw! That was adorable! I loved it!

lol i almost burst a gut laughing after i read both versions! it is so funny! *Wipes tears away, still occasionally giggleing*

I liked this version better. You had some really funny lines that stuck out to me:

1. Not that big a deal? It was a huge deal (for reasons I hadn’t exactly decided upon at the moment).

2.I wondered if she was struggling internally about the multitude of ways to end my life. I tend to have that effect on people.

3. I almost wished Western show down music was playing in the background.

Nicely done.

Lol. That made me laugh. Food fight! And then- Rouge: Moment Killer. Good chapter.

That was wonderful and, this story is so sweet.

Luna

That was adorable _ Both Kitty and Kurt’s POVs.