Reviews for Familiar
AARaven14 chapter 14 . 6/23
I thought Sirius was Harry's godfather.
Tina Saliceti-Irizarry chapter 34 . 6/17
Awesome story !
cptbludz13 chapter 34 . 8/24/2019
I want to know what memory was removed/blocked from Hermione... as well as the one from Harry. But what I really want to know is the whole ordeal behind Salazar Slytherins death and him supposedly leaving Hogwarts but in reality being down in the chamber of secrets?
Guest chapter 5 . 7/29/2019
:] (-) (o) :3
mumphie chapter 34 . 3/6/2019
Very interesting and well woven story. Do you have a conclusion in mind?
inuyasha16451 chapter 34 . 1/29/2019
Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon
Guest chapter 7 . 12/9/2018
I lve that harry potter is an elf it is a good change!
Darkfang333 chapter 11 . 10/9/2018
could you recommend stories like this one except where harry isn't gay i have nothing against gays but i just can't see harry being gay
FotoDi chapter 34 . 6/10/2018
Oh Thank God. KRAI is alive!
I was worried that you would kill off Harry’s Familiar and then Harry in a fit of pique would hatch the last Basilisk egg to be his new magical BFF...

It looks as though you have abandoned this story.
which is too bad as it us interesting.

I have a few Q’s:

1) What’s up with Hermione? Why isn’t McGonagall all ‘hot & bothered’ that her favorite muggleborn lion is acting like a vapid airhead?

2) Isn’t Hermione The Head Girl in this their Seventh year? Ron is Gryffindor’s Quidditch Team Captain. Who are the Seventh year Prefects? Obviously, Harry isn’t a Prefect or Head Boy...

3) Where is Ginny Weasley, the easily manipulated, obsessed BWL Fan Girl... dreams of becoming “Mrs. Harry Potter”? I know Ginny is/was dating Dean Thomas in your AU backstory. However, this year everyone must have been stunned to see a surprisingly fit, tall, handsome, well-dressed, intense, intelligent, de-spectacled, BOY-WHO-LIVED! A Harry Potter transformed, who is unconsciously oozing mesmerizing magical power as well as a hormone-riddled, dominant-Alpha allure. I am wondering why the sub-Rosa ‘Harry Potter Fan Club’ hasn’t devolved into a gaggle of blithering idiots and resorted to en masse stalking of this famous, rich, buff hunk! Hello? Romilda Vane?! Ginny? Astoria? Creavey I & Creavey II? (Wouldn’t Cho Chang have already graduated?)
I can see the unmarried Old Biddies at the Head Table, blushing and fanning themselves, trading off-color jokes, and starting a betting pool (Pamona, Irma, Poppy, Minerva & even Trelawney!) Why has there been only vague reaction from not only the trapped inhabitants of Hogwarts but also the official Scandal Sheets: THE DAILY PROPHET? (Rita Skeeter would never let this go!), TEEN WITCH WEEKLY? the infamous outlier, THE QUIBBLER?

4) If Magical Maturation can be such a traumatic and transformative event, why would Dumbles leave Harry with the Dursley’s? Harry’s magical backlash probably registered the the Richter Scsle even with him hidden behind centuries-old magical wards. If left amidst disdainful & abusive muggles, as well as deliberately kept in ignorance of the impending, gut-wrenching, pain-filled, uncontrollable magical event... Harry could have destroyed Little Winging!? Regardless, a burst of unknown power of GREAT MAGNITUDE in the middle of pedantic boring Surrey would surely have caught the attention of the muggles, probably scientists, MI-5, & HRM’s Military. Dumbledore’s plan whereby he deliberately ostracizes and keeps in ignorance Harry Potter could have had cataclysmic consequences. The old Fool!
FotoDi chapter 17 . 6/10/2018
So, Draco Malfoy is Skytherin’s True genetic & magical heir...

Do the Slytherin genes come through French-descended Lucius Abraxas Malfoy? Or, is it through the infamous, British, interbred, powerhouse Black family via Narcissa Cassiopeia Black?

N. B. The notorious Black Family has been powerful for a long time on the British isles. There is a reason Voldemort wanted to ‘collect’ them all. The Blacks have married into almost every important magical bloodline and they guard their secrets with the same vigor that they restrict access to their legendary Library.

Blacks Power

Powerful in magic,
powerful in politics,
powerful in the economy due to amassed assets,
powerful in Dark Magic,
powerful in accumulated & hidden family magic, powerful due to their magnetic aristocratic beauty,
powerful manipulators b/c of amassed secrets,
powerful practitioners of Magic
FotoDi chapter 16 . 6/10/2018
Okay, KRAI is a very manipulative familiar!
In this scenario, it seems to be for Harry Potter’s benefit. Well, ‘Benefit’ as interpreted by a relatively new snake Familiar ... who suspiciously has a lot of pertinent knowledge for a not naturally occurring hybrid reptile (actually bred as a source for dark potions ingredients)... a 6ft snake who is both “young” and previously “unbonded”.
KRAI is ... Very crafty. Very powerful. Very learned. Very sly. Very opinionated. Very skilled in the Mind Arts. Very knowledgeable about recent magical European history. Very astute. Very observant.

Interesting...

Is KRAI a manifestation of Mother Magic, seeking balance?
FotoDi chapter 8 . 6/10/2018
This is really a interesting plot so far.
“Kudos” to you for your pacing & partial reveals
which draw in the reader slowly...
Well done so far! (Ch. 8) First Reading 6/2018
Sami chapter 34 . 6/6/2018
Please update T~T please?
RandomThingz123 chapter 7 . 8/17/2017
He better cut his hair!
Lilybud chapter 34 . 2/8/2017
well damn more of this sweet tea please
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