how sweet of inuyasha but the anime made him come of as a real jerk but I couldnt accept that nya

Good Story, too bad you couldn't extend it into shippo and Kirara would do it.

nice, love how you have shippo maturing a bit.

...poor girls would probably be scared for life. I however think it's cute. Shippo needs more love, and i think Kirara is a nice match for him

Lol Awesome! I reall didn't know what to expect when i found this but it turns out to be very...good lol. Or i'm just a pervert. :D

very intresting awesome awesome kool kool rating for you

(highest rating i give)

shippo/kirara is a huge success /(o)

AH! I LOVE IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I have always seen shippo and kirara as a pair! Glad sumone else does 2

I loved the story. I would love to see more storyies similar to this. But I love for it to have a great lemon, just like in Cosmo Memory. You just leave readers expecting after that. But if you wrote a continous of this with a lemon, I love it even more. Shippo and Kilala Forever!

Good job u should finish it

hey this isnt it is it? i mean u will write more wont you? please its good

...wow, nice! I always thought there was something there :)

This has got to be the most disturbing thing I have ever read. Shippo is like 7. He can't...do...that. Shippo doesn't even know about stuff like that, remember? He blushed when Kagome kissed InuYasha during the movie! If THAT got him wierded out, what would THIS do? You guys are sick!

please make another PLEASE!

Cute to the umpteenth degree,but it can work! This is a pairing that I have never seen before and literally stumbled on by accident. You should keep working on other stories in the same vein. Creativity is a useful thing. Keep up your writing.