Reviews for The First Sight Curse |
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![]() ![]() Continuation of previous comment: if they were from different backgrounds and areas and inexplicably had the same first names as if their parents looked at them as babies and felt drawn to those names. And having the same bad guys who aren't even the bad guys anymore by the end of the game seemed a little dull. I did like how even tho lucrecia showed up there was no prolonged focus on her or a love triangle. I don't hate her it's just kinda rehashed a lot. |
![]() ![]() I liked this one it was long like a short book and well written. The only things I didn't like were A) Vincent and yuffie ended up in a kind of pedophile relationship which was uncomfortable. In the the past it wouldn't have been because such a thing was common and allowed but doing it for modern era was kinda creepy seemed like it would have been more romantic for him to wait for two years and marry her. B) I didn't like that everyone had the same last names as in the game. I understand the concept of reincarnation but it seems to coincidental that they'd still have the same last names and that even the parents names would be the same. it would be more exciting if they were all from different families and backgrounds and were |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God. This is so perfect aaarggg. At first, I thought this story will be settled in a time and world which is normal but I never expected it to be like the game world. As for your plot, I love love it. 3 Eventhough Vincent ended up poor. Not totally poor. But I just wonder, why you didn't include Aerith? But oh well, you have a real talent in writing and this is one of the best yuffentine I ever read. Good job. *wink* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wwaaah me gonna cryyy!;3; cute cute romantic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omfg...so...so...AWESOME!keep the good work kiddo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Nice story. Loved it. The way their love had been developed here was cute and fun, tough. About the dramatic part, he began very rich and miserably lonely and then, all because of her, became poor but happy. That kinda remind us that money can't buy true happiness, and we can only find it if we really throw ourselves in it and give up everything for it. Good job! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've really enjoyed this story, I thought it was very sweet. I love how their relationship developed and how the story gradually became more like the actual FFVII. I love their little freak-out after they arrive in Midgar as well. They are just so sweet with each other. Really good job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beatifull story, loved every moment of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Godo can be such an ass. Great chap love the story so far_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! that is a great story! i c an't wait to read more of your work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... *squees in fangirl joy* Domestic happiness is always a great thing to behold. I do hope that Vincent and Yuffie will be able to bypass the hair disaster that Cloud's child might have, though. ; Having Zack and Godo show up was quite nice, too. It ties up the story wonderfully, completing the full circle. It makes the growth that Vincent and Yuffie have gone through that much more evident. But my favorite part has got to be the part when you went over how Yuffie loved introducing Vincent to new people as her husband. It's akin to seeing a bunny with a large panther. *giggles* Great job! ~_- |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really have enjoyed every bit of this story. Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for finishing this awesome fic! I loved every minute and will probably re-read it again and again and again. Th Clotiness really made me smile like crazy :) and I was glad that Godo and Zack appeared. I was expecting that Zack will know Cloud and Tifa, it is canon after all, so it is possible. I also love the change in Yuffie, I think it's good that she matured a bit. She's a great character and you captured her well. About Vincent... well, I could never decide which looks "tastier" TurkVince or the GameVince... that's a very hard decision. I think that the outward change he went through to evolve from the businessman to the gunman was believable and I adore it. Godo must've been surprized he-he-he... "his son-in-law had developed a striking resemblance to a vampire" this totoally cracked me up, so Yuffie-esque XD So all in all, this is one of my top3 favourite Yuffentines of all time. Thanks again! I hope some white and fuzzy plot-bunnies will attack you in the future. See you, Szahara-a |