So much bowing to their authority.
Disgusting.

Just a side note, there's no Northbrook High School in Northbrook, Illinois (at least in our universe :-) ). Here it's called Glenbrook North High School.
And great story, by the way!

The story is actually pretty good but will you mix the great differences of Marvel, and DC there are characters that can’t exist.

I disagree in this character in two things first the star of Krypton was never yellow it was confirmed to be a red dwarf.

The conversion of a yellow star to a red giant means death to the solar system if the star is massive it will explode, and the other simply engulfs the other world with its massive size until all of its fuel burns up, and dies.

The other error is the location of Krypton it is located on another galaxy it will thousands of years traveling at light speed unless it finds a wormhole.

The location of Krypton in DC is in the same galaxy as the Milky Way because such a trip would take too long.

Not really liking the fact he just tells them everything without knowing much of them. For all he knows they could be future enemies. He told them his name, took him to his home, and even disclosed his origin so readily. I don't think that is a smart move.

Seriously Magneto why can't just stop at the Genosha idea and focus all your energy on making Genosha a super power, but you just have the things a step further in a horrible way with this meteor fall idea. People generally feel better about a war when they know they have the moral high ground and you striking first against humanity in such horrific way would not endear you to most mutants. And less not forget some mutants would die in thus attack and killing so many humans would be stopping the future that would be born from some of them from being born. In short it's a truly terrible idea.

You are seriously over powering Clark aren't, because a high Alpha level Mutant or better yet an Omega Level Mutant could depending on how destructive their power is seriously her Clark even through his invulnerability. And a Beyond Omega Level Mutant could definitely kill Clark and a powerful enough telepathic can get into Clark's mind and control him, power that Jean and Xavier should definitely have unless Xavier still has those blocks on Jean's Telepathy.

And as I said I may not like how Magneto goes about things because he makes some serious mistakes but his philosophy isn't completely wrong war is coming and Mutant kind must be ready. Humans do are are going see mutants as a treat to them to their supremacy on Earth. While Xavier sits around preaching coexistence and protecting the humans that are hunting his people mutants all over the world are being hunted down to kill them, imprisoned, experimented on for various reasons, or turned into weapons or all of the above.

as I said humans can be rely coexist with each other and discriminate against each other for the smallest stupidest things, while on the other hand mutants are an entirely different race and humans will feel justified in discriminating against them. A best case scenario for Xavier's naivete is that humans will toss mutants onto reservations to live, out of the "goodness" of human hearts.

I do hope that your not planning on Nerfing the mutant race to make Kryptonian's look better. Because their are Mutants that can rival a fully powered Kryptonian(and I mean the DC comic book Kryptonian's that show their full power even Superman Prime) their called Omega Class Mutants and those who could wipe the floor with them their called Beyond Omega Classification Mutants.

Jean Grey at full power is a Beyond Omega Level Mutant and when I say full power I mean when she is perfectly joined with The Phoenix Force be use apart if Jean's mutation is that she is the perfect vessel for The Phoenix Force. The Phoenix herself has said that Jean is the one true Phoenix, that Jean is the closest she will ever get to having a mortal like form. And in case you don't know the Phoenix Force is a Cosmic Entity and is more powerful that any Kryptonian's or their Gods/Goddesses combined. She is the nexus of life and all Psionic energy throughout the multiverse this her job to cut or burn away any part of the universe that has stagnated and recreate it anew so that I can continue to grow and evolve. She is the embodiment of creation and destruction throughout the multiverse and will ultimately be responsible for destroying the universe and recreating it anew when the time comes.

Do you truly believe that Kal-El or any other Kryptonian could service if Jean Grey unleashed even a fraction of that power on him or them? The answer his no they would die, she would wipe them from existence with merely a thought.

I must admit while I don't like Erick's methods he is right that Humans as a whole will never accept Mutants some humans will accept them but most won't. Mutants are the future they can do everything Humans can and much more and they have every redeeming quality that Humans have and some of them have much more than that. And they are powerful and Humans do not like being made to feel inferior, because Humans as a whole are arrogant as hell and the belief that they are special in the universe is pretty much embedded in Human civilization and even their religion.

And now comes along a different race, Mutants who simply by existing prove themselves superior and more special turn humans. The fact is humans will come to the conclusion that they are obsolete and Mutants are their replacements and they aren't entirely wrong. Because war or no war more and more mutants are going to be born and they are just going to get more and more powerful, more Omega Level and Beyond Omega Level Mutants (or at least those with the potential to be in these two Classifications) will be born and that's a fact it's how the Celestial's created Mutants to be.

So even if Humans won't hate Mutants out of prejudice and bigotry they will despise them out of jealousy. And what about Human civilization how will that be change by Mutants, heck even sports, why have in shape humans playing sports when you have Mutants with superhuman strength, speed, and durability? Or what about Jon's that requires intelligence? Their are many Mutants who have super human intelligence as their gift or apart of their gifts. I even know of one Mutant whose brain is like a super computer superior to any super computer made by humans, but I don't remember what her name is.

So Xavier is very wrong about the world changing and humans being more accepting it's a lie a mask that being civilized the world is still over flowing with prejudice and bigotry and now that they will find out about thus actual different race being on Earth, they will view Mutants race as a threat to them and lest not even mention the Inhuman race and other sentient non humans on Earth. Now humans will feel legitimately justified in their bigotry and prejudice. And of course their will be all those who will use Mutants, Inhumans, Extraterrestrials, and other powerful beings as weapons and or experiments in the hopes of benefiting themselves whether it be to make themselves strong of live longer or whatever.

In short things are looking bleak for Mutants, Inhumans and others and they better be prepared to fight and win if the want equality and don't want humans to shut all over them because if humans believe they have the upper hand they will never get true equality.

Sorry to reiterate something you’ve already heard (if you even read this) but 50 metric tons is too low a number to use as a benchmark. Even though you said well over, a Boeing 737 has a mass of 80 metric tons and he casually lifts those like we pick up buckets.