This was unbelievably excellent! That ending was so clever. I’ve read a few of your works, so even after she disappeared, I trusted it wouldn’t be the final ending for her. I can’t wait to read the sequel!

i loved it

This is absolutely amazing, beautiful! I can't even put into words how to describe this story, I love it it!

No thanks to duj. I hate prudes who read fan fiction. Go read Christian romance novels, and let the rest of us enjoy our sex. If you can't handle sex, why are you reading about witchcraft and death, for heaven's sake? Bloody hypocrites! Sin is sin, makes no difference which kind, you are going to hell either way, if you have that belief, so go away and fondle your crucifix. The Bible says not to suffer a witch to live, so get over yourself, you are a sinner for reading this with or without sex! All utter nonsense as far as I'm concerned. I love sex, doing it, and reading about it, and there is plenty here, so screw your attempts at censorship. That's the real sacrilege, as far as I'm concerned! And don't give me any bull hockey about protecting the young ones, as they know more than all the rest of us on how to get around on the internet, and they see, read, and write plenty of sex, and more raunchy than anything here! Off my soapbox now, thanks.

good. but very the seduction thing disturbed me( for personal reasons, which i will not say, so don't ask) but overall, i like the fic.

I think this chapter fits Dumbledore very well. You apologized in the end of the chapter, but if something like this had truly happened I think he would have acted similarly to what you wrote.

It's so romantic how Dumblefuck ok'd Severus' seduction of Hermione before Hermione even agreed to it. Children being used as sex sacrifices in an adult's war is so ROMANTIC!11!

You're very right. You suck at writing "romance".

I love how Dumblefuck always "realizes" things too late to save "his" people. Ah, so Severus *is* a pedo if he's already thinking about seducing her on command. If he whistles to his dick will it rise on command?

Severus might say he's not a pedophile in this fic but he didn't mind being a wife-beater in your other one, so how would we know?

Dumblefuck has always had only his own ends in mind regardless of the manipulative pain and abuse he lavishes on his chosen.

I don't understand the motivations you've given Dumbledor with regards to the dark arts. Let's f her up and then kill her for being f'd up. Doesn't make any sense. Why not, I don't know, not f her up in the first place.

I hate you duj

Boo duj, no thanks from me for prudish edit!

I have enjoyed these stories for years. Thank You

Can't get the good chapter without registering on those godawful gaudy sites and I may be 46 but I am not a joiner. Too many people have my email as it is... If you are going to post a lame teen fic, give it the proper rating. I don't appreciate having to suffer through seventeen chapters without a payoff. Sorry, but I've never been so pissed off reading a fic before, and it had so much potential!