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lovely!, so great

Ooooooooooooo nice end to the chapter ;)

Awww... poor Yamcha...

I ve read numerous vegetabulma was the best

U have read tons of vegeta bulma fanfictions and this is the

I. Love. This. Sooo much! *internal squeal*

This is by far best vegeta bulma fanfic I've ever it explains all that would ve happened and like we wanted it to happen

wow. I love this. what an engaging experience.

Loved it!

I enjoyed the last chapter a lot. Lovely story. Yamcha had the best character development, I just wanted more vegebul interaction. At some point I had to check if this wasn't a really a yamcha x bulma story.
But for more now I have your other stories!

fun fact: trunks and goten were born without tails
Puar Speaks The Truth. Finally, it has nothing to do with vegeta, she just didn't love yamcha anymore.
And goku knowsʖloved how HE DID IT. The goku/radditz parallel was great.

great chapter tho

when something happens in a ff and it's canon so you know it was going to happen but you didn't expect to happen so "early"

I've been meaning to write this a few chapters before but oh well. I don't if you had a beta reader because there is a lack of commas in some sentences, some minor details like that. I've noticed that for a while now. Nothing that bothers me much tho. I don't think anyone would drop the story because of it haha I just had to say.
And oh no, you used my least favorite trope in vegebul storieswhyyyyyy. Random guy threats Bulma (most of time he sexually harasses her) so vegeta can show that he really cares. I'm honestly so bored. At least this time bulma fought back and she wasn't raped. thank god. And it served for another purpose: bulma realizing vegeta is still vegeta. otherwise I'd have to drop this good story