so beautiful.. I like this missed one shot that we can imagine what happened with them together on the roof top!

Great stuff I loved it the ending was especially sweet looking forward to reading more of your writings

Aww that was so sweet! :D especially the last line... ’maybe there was something to be said about being a mayfly after all...then she wouldn't have to see him leave in the morning’ :’) that line almost made me cry! :’)

good chapter!

what a cute addition to that episode! loves it!

In search of something to read after the dreadful day I had, I decided to skim through the stories of my favourite authors. Maybe something would spike my attention and so it has! I somehow missed this wonderful wonderful one shot! It was the perfect equanimity between fluff and smut. Never too much, never too little, just...right. And so bitter sweet. Gah! My spirits are higher already! Fantastic work! Thank you.

so sweet. i love the end.

aw that was great you trully captured there beauty please postr a lit i think you would do a great job! Again awsome job i loved it!

Beautifully written, the imagery was vivid and subtle all at once.

The last line was perfect, as was the whole of the fic.

Well done, I can't wait to see what your write next.

-Ani

wow great piece

i love your view on this its so interesitng.

Great Story..I really enjoyed it :)

I like how you took one simple quote from last weeks episode and were able to create such a brilliant story. Really good, I enjoyed reading it.

Wow! Amazingly written, i think it really captured the essence of Rory and Logan.

Is there such a thing as beautifully written smut? Cause you just wrote it. lol. I love how you incorporated the mayfly into their story. LOVED IT. Absolutely loved it! Love me some Sophie-smut ;-). I didn't mind the C or F words being used at all, though they did stand out when I first read it. A very bold move of yours, in my opinion, but I thought they fit the story completely. These are two young adults in their early twenties that went from living together and probably enjoying a very healty sex life to long distance lovers for almost 5mo. An "I want to make sweet love to you" would be frustrating. These are two sexually frustrated individuals. So kudos on the C and F words! Hope you write another one like these soon!