Reviews for Coming Back |
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dg101 chapter 1 . 10/21/2006 Lovely.I hope you will updae soon.:) |
ArodLoverus2001 chapter 1 . 10/20/2006 awesome, hope u continue! |
Cold Ember chapter 1 . 10/20/2006 This was very good... very well written... but I am really confused... there's a lot of backstory there and you never fully explain it. You should maybe think about doing a story about the back story... just so it's less confusing, cause it really is a great concept. |