Reviews for One Step at a Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, this was so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. Well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd say I'm shocked, but honestly I'm not. It was inevitable |
![]() ![]() I see what you there in the second to last sentence |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an AMAZING story. I couldn't take my eyes off the screen! Sorry I didn't review for the previous chapters, but I all I saw when I got to the bottom of each chapter was the NEXT button. You really deserve more reader and reviewers for such a beautiful story! Very touching and romantic. |
![]() ![]() Love it! Just love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a good story! I started crying at the ending. It's soo touching. 3 awesome! Great job! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() You said this story is based on A Walk To Remember. Does that mean it's basically a HSM version of A Walk To Remember, or did you make it different? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was very heart warming! I cried at the end... Keep writing beautiful stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! I've read many trailers on fanfiction, and I must say, this is by-far the best yet. The way the narrator's dialog, description of scenes and characters' speech moves so smoothly is certainly pure talent on your behalf. And on top of it all, the story plot sounds great! I'll admit, the beginning sounded like it was going to be a bit cliche, but it turned out beautifully! I can't wait to read "One Step at a Time". I know it's completed and you are probably currently working on other projects, but you you like it if I reviewed each chapter anyways? |
![]() ![]() ![]() -sigh- After 2 days of reading, ive finally finished. And let me say, as much as I am crying rigt now because of the altrenate ending, I do somehow..for some reason pefer it. I mean, I love the actual ending, which also made me tear up..but right now, im bawling. And I love how Troy managed to finish half a last entry before he joined Gabby in heaven, and Darbus (teehee). The story itself was simply amazing, I dont know how I only just came across it since i read JLK back in the day, and loved it as much as this. I'll stop now and just say thanks for a great story, and you did an amazing job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it extremely. Personally, I like the alternate ending more, probably because it was the original and because of my strange want to read a tragedy (I'm not usually like this). So well written just like Pinkie Promise. You're a really great writer! ] Peace. ~Pam |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I luv this! Like you said, it's very A Walk To Remember-esque. I loved the first ending more than the second, though. Maybe it was cuz Gabriella lived in that one... idk. But w/e, this whole story is very well written. i love it. cant believe this had been up here for 2 yrs and i never found it! Oh well, i did now and it's one of my favorites. Well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() i so loved this story it was so good i so wish i didnt read the alternate ending though it was to sad i liked the other one better awesome job loved it |