Well, that was a lot better than Naruto actually having sex with Ran. I was wondering though, that if Ran did, the fox may have told Naruto that he could because he was an Uchiha too! Now that would have gone a HELL of a lot worse. Then again, Kurama didn't tell Naruto that Sasuke was cheating and whom with.
I had a lot of fun reading your fic. This was awesome. Thanks for sharing.

I liked it a lot. The oc's were done well. My only wish is that Sasuke wasn't forgiven so easy. Yeah he was tricked, but he fell for it of his own violation and didn't deserve forgiveness so quickly.

Not the best ending but I did enjoy the story. Would have been better if Naruto and Uchitake got together. Sasuke was an ass in this story. And Naruto should have hated him, especially that they were not married long and didn't have the close bond yet. Would never want Sasuke to die but if Naruto ran off with Uchitake that would be nice.

omf what the fucking hell ughhhh now I wish Naruto would cheat on Sasuke with (sasukes enemy) but we all know he won't he's to kind I can't believe Sasuke cheated now I fucking hate him I really do I don't see him the same anymore he is just doesn't deserve Naru or the baby...

Oh...I like the fanfic don't get me wrong buut Uchitake(T_T). I feel for him seriously and stupid Sasuke! He should've been the one to die after all the shit he made Naruto go through. Ran has been with Naruto when Sasuke could no would not and those were his most important moments in his life. Cooommeeee oooon. I think it would've been better of Naruto went with him instead. Not only would it be better, but also it wouldve been unexpected (kinda) and a good twist to the usual plot of happy get together despite cheating thing but oh well. Still loved the story though! (*ω*)

Normally I don't review unless I have finished the fanfic or at the last chapter if not completed buuut I just want to saaaaay...YOU ARE MAKING ME FALL IN LOVE WITH UCHITAKE! I want him to be with Naruto (T_T)! Sasuke is a dick head and Uchitake is...well not a dickhead. Plus it seems to me like he really (or would) loves and appreciate Naruto unlike Sasu-dick! I'm having mixed feelings here! (;_;)

Très déçue par cette fin vraiment... j'adore le sasunaru mais là Sasuke méritait de mourir à la place de Ran. À partir du moment où il a pensé "no Revenge first Naruto second" il ne méritait plus rien venant de Naruto. Je pense même que Ran aurait pu rendre le blond beaucoup heureux. Au moins, Ran connaît ses priorités et sait que l'amour et la famille passent avant le pouvoir et la satisfaction personnelle. Beaucoup de review le disent déjà et sont, je trouve, assez véritables. Tu écris bien on ne peut pas le nier mais cette histoire n'est pas bonne. Trop d'incohérences et un scénario surréaliste avec des personnages qui ne sont pas fidèles à l'image que tu souhaites leur donner. Tu ne peux pas faire de Naruto une personne de déterminée et de juste si il laisse Sasuke le tromper avec Orochimaru sans rien dire. Je comprends maintenant pourquoi il y a autant de commentaires sur cette fiction ! Ils sont là pour montrer que cette fanfiction n'est pas bonne. Dommage.

PS : j'écris cette review en français. Tu peux la traduire grâce à l'outil traducteur de ce site même s'il est mauvais. Je ne garantie pas par contre, la comprehension complète de cette review.

Fuck you Uchitake! It's not actually your fault but your father and mother! HOWEVER, the moment you massacred them, you became someone much worse. Sasuke was not even at fault, he's only a child! Because of your growing hatred, you've hurt the innocent, Sasuke and Naruto were just caught up in your sick plan to make Sasuke suffer because of your jealousy. He's only a child, you can't blame him! If anything, Itachi and Sasuke can even help you.

Stfu Uchitake. Don't steal Naruto! And you asshole Sasushit get away from that pedophile and come back to your ... Naruto! You two are clearly in love, BUT are idiots!

Wtf Sasuke? Eww xD Sigh. Oreo-pedo...

Ugh who is this Uchitake, you better not mess with them

noooo :( its sad that naruto is still with sasuke when sasuke he obviously dont deserve him :(

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Just felt the need to point that out...

I could not read the last chap, I seriously skimmed through it. I was upset that Ran died and Naruto got with Sasuke. Yes I understand that you want to protect what's your, but to leave a pregnant Naruto, Also add that he has sex with someone else it's not right!
I was hoping they didn't get together and or at least have Naruto make boundaries and not get together with Sasuke right away. But I must say I do love the way you right and it was a good story.. to a point.

they're all so livey