Reviews for Succubus Nights |
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TheSongWriter chapter 5 . 1/1/2009 Dude,this is so exciting! What happened to gojyo? O_O PLease continue this lol I will subscribe and favourite :P I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon! _ |
Gosurori-Otaku chapter 5 . 11/22/2008 Oof. We need updates, here... |
Jamica chapter 5 . 3/23/2008 Is adding this story to my story alert good too? I'm not that good at giving comments :P |
elysahb chapter 3 . 5/13/2007 I LOVE THE JIM BUTCHER QUOTE! fits perfect. |
Faichibi chapter 1 . 3/14/2007 kool |
ArcticPhoenix91 chapter 5 . 1/21/2007 You update at last! I've always waited for a LOT of actions in your fic. And that was it. Awesome! |
A September Rose chapter 5 . 1/20/2007 I have to admit at first, I was a bit skeptical at reading "another vampire story" but I admire what you've done with the premise. Everyone has been in character for the most part, your description is great, and even your OCs are believable threats. Possibly the only dialogue flaw is that I don't believe Hakkai swears as much as you have him do, but that's a minor distraction, and if he's under stress, it's understandable. I like the action and you got in a few good laughs. Of course it's somehow all Gojyo's fault, poor kappa. _~ |
Tamie123 chapter 1 . 1/16/2007 I am so confuses are the sister succubi, vampires, both 1/2 succubus 1/2 vampire. A vampire suck blood, and succubus/incubus steals souls, but they both are seducers. |
Tamie123 chapter 4 . 1/15/2007 This is a good story but where are the succubuses. I see the vampires, but not the succubuses. |
monsoonblues chapter 4 . 11/30/2006 That was very interesting indeed. A convincing story, you've made good use of Gojyo's weakness for women here. Your writing is eloquent, albeit a little polite when it comes to Sanzo...a few spelling errors, but other than that, I really hope you update this because I'm riveted... Thanks for the read:) |
ArcticPhoenix91 chapter 4 . 11/4/2006 Oh! What's gonna happen! Hey, are ya discriminating Goku there? |
ArcticPhoenix91 chapter 3 . 10/26/2006 So happy Goku's not that stupid... but i didn't know that Hakkai's that stupid and Sanzo's so easy to convince. I think you gotta make everyone to be more themselves. Btw Gojyo's weapon is called Shakujo, hope this info could be used in the hopefully new action in the next chapter. |
sylphstarwind chapter 3 . 10/24/2006 Just...wondering... Is this a Mary Sue-type story? I mean, gorgeous vampire, with perfect long legs, perfect hourglass frame, etc etc (well, at least she's called a bitch/whore)... Did I miss something, or is that what this is? Sorry if I sound judgemental or anything, I'm not trying to be. To each his/her own _; Anyway, it's fairly well-written and all... Never watched/read Saiyuki (I think I'll check it out), so my interest is waning. Good luck, though! |
i love athrun chapter 3 . 10/20/2006 IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER! |
namariegreenleaf chapter 3 . 10/20/2006 please add more! love it! *sings* |