Reviews for Stay Away! He's Mine! |
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![]() ![]() Rudolph gets better because he is a vampire, but the only way to save Tony is turning him. If you want, have them find the stone and both turn back. |
![]() ![]() I love this! |
![]() ![]() I love it. One idea you could do is that Rudolph does bite Tony and to find the Stone they ask the McAshton twins into helping. |
![]() ![]() Please make more chapters I love yaoi and your story is really good I hope you wil let rudolph and tony be together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "oh you figured that didn't you?" Hahahaha update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i want you to update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! really enjoyed reading this! but u havnt updated since '07! how come? please continue this story its really great! :) |
![]() ![]() damn please next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the movie, love this story. - Avari-at-heart |
![]() ![]() I think tony should become a vampire. It could totally work cause maybe the only way to save him is to turn him into a vampire. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() I do not understand the point of chapter 7, What even happened after chapter 6. it was going along great until chapter 7, I think you should rewrite chapter 7 to tell us what happened after chapter 6. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't really give thoughts of where this should go (I don't actually write fics, just read them) but I really hope you continue this! |
![]() ![]() This is so cute please continue this story I love it so much it is one of the better little vampire fics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you keep writing. I want to read about after the movie when they get older. Maybe them going to school? Their human lives? should create a Little Vampire catagory in Movies. More people would review and read if they had one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so I admit my last reviw was a bit harsh. Nine year olds making out just kinda goes against... well my sense of reality. But this story is begining to grow on me as I read it, and those last few lines were priceless. I only wish you would add more discription and maybe talk about after the movie so my brain doesn't keep going "wait... that's not what happened!" However, you are very good with dialouge. I look foward to reading more. |