Nice chapter friend Kim and Ron are the best couple now and ever.

Wow Is a Dream is a nice chapter see u later my friend.

Nice wade Kim and Ron Very Nice.

I Loved couple Kim and Ron so much see u sooon.

Nice Kim you put her in her site.

Nice chapter see you In the next chapter soon.

Nice Start see you what happen in the next chapter now.

I was wondering where this was going. Nice save. :-)
Although I couldn't really picture Drew as Dr. Smith ...

this was just so random that i had to love it

Please continue this! I can totally see the whole island thing playing out quite well.

Interesting but not quite up to par with your other works

haha...i take it you are a cubs fan?

It's a shame that this was ended so soon: the continuing adventures and budding romance of Kim and Ron on that island would of been a fun read.

~

Mike.

Okay. Exactly five lines into this I had a pretty good idea where things were going. Eighteen lines in and there was no question.

But then, quite surprisingly, there was. After the references to the Kimmunicator, the Kepler I, SmartyMart, and Wade-well, I wasn't quite sure WHERE I was. And, thanks to the author's note and the end, it appears that the story doesn't exactly know either.

Which I think is a very good thing.

Another good thing is that this chapter seemed more interested in the blossoming relationship between our two heroes than simply turning the story into a GI meets LIS crossover/warped/fusion/whatever. In other words, I liked Kim abushing Ron with that kiss.

Very interested to see if this continues and what form it will take if it does.

I can appreciate the difficulty of updating. I make procrastination an art form.

I've been out of the habit of keeping up with your updates. Well-written, with the requisite series feel-

But-and I don't mean to sound like a wet blanket-since I read the earlier chpts without reviewing-& I'm kinda hit & miss about that

I miss the Kim /Ron chemistry in the Gilligan /Mary Ann setting. It had a certain summer romance sweetness, like Annette Funicello and Frankie Avalon in their beach movies.

maybe it's the idea of seeing a romance in it's genesis-two strangers who don't have a captain's authority, a billionare's wealth, or an actress's fame. Kim is already devoid of any Food Chain standing-and Ron, bottom-of-the-rung dweller as he is, sees her virtues ahead of everyone else.

Or maybe it's the sun and sand.