Heh. I hope some of the cold of space creeps in and they have to huddle under Batman's cape for warmth. How undignified! _

Hehe that was soooo cute keep going

Hehe that was soooo cute keep going

ahahahahahahaha

This was great!

I hope you update soon

Love the story!

Uh-Oh! I wonder who's gonna face the Wrath of the Bat first.

can't wait for the next story!

-Laces

I LOVE IT! Just how many superheroes can you get stuck in a chute? And it being lead lined superman will not be able to see them...

Very funny beginning! Who's going to join them now? And what'll be the first real question? I just hope someone finds them soon who can fly! Please, update soon!

Oh dear. Chaos is sure to ensue. This stories a great pick-me-up after a long day. Keep it up.

ah ha ha! i must know what IT is now!

This looks like it has the makings to be very funny. Keep it up.

This is gonna be good! Update!

I liked it!

I was a bit surprised at the end when Batman seemed to be stuck down there with the rest of them, however. I thought he was more obsessive-compulsive about studying the terrain and making thorough plans than that. Wouldn't he know there was no way to open a door and walk out after you landed at the bottom of this exact crevasse, according to the blueprints? At the very least, I'd expect him to have tied a rope to something at the top so he could pull himself back up if necessary.

Of course, the chapter ended right there, so it's always possible that he came down there knowing exactly what he was doing, with some clever plan up his sleeve for getting out. Or he may discover that his knowledge of the layout of this portion of the Watchtower isn't completely up to date. What if somebody else in the JLA just recently sealed off an exit that Batman knew about from a year ago? Then he might assure the other guys that he had everything under control, and then one minute later have to eat his words when he tried to activate the secret panel that isn't there anymore, and discovered that he didn't have everything under control after all!

Of course, that's just a couple of possibilities that occur to me off the top of my head. You could have something completely different up your sleeve. And if Batman doesn't have a plan for escape, I'll live with it - I make more allowances for "Humor" on stuff like that :)

Great chap, poor Roy is going to get into trouble with at least Dick if not also Bruce if he finds out because if he hid it in Dick's room it must be something he didn't want anyone finding, please update soon