'The bolt nailed it right in the ass' had me laughing, and let me tell you, drinking was a bad idea because trying not to spit water out is hard, especially when it goes down the wrong pipe.

Your stories are my favorite.

I friggin heart this story. ;) Great characterizations, fun banter, little glimpses of underneath the underneath.

Sam displays empathy and self control and protectiveness. Dean doesn't obscure his intelligence in front of his brother, acknowledges Sam's partnership. This story shines a light (heh heh) on the better parts of their brotherhood.

Thank you for writing and sharing!

Brilliant :D I loved Dean's incredulity at being run over by his own car, and my favourite part was Sam and Dean's argument which was ended by them setting off the van's alarm in the hospital car park. I've read a few of your stories now, and I'd like to say that you write great confrontations between Sam and Dean. You are the argument-writing champion ahead of anyone else I've read. Thanks.

Hey! I really like this! I'm looking at really, really early SPN fics, caught yours, and happy that I did!

Gosh, they're such *brothers*. This is made of win.

Great story - laughed and loved it throughout.

That was really sweet. Nothing else to say, really. Just sweet. Good story, cool setting, great language. All I need for a fantastic read.

This is awesome. You are such the thorough researcher, can I just say, or else such the haver of random knowledge. Awesome banter, awesome whump. Loved the Infinity Room and Dean's mild freakout. And all your zillions of observations on the boys' character and especially on how they deal with each other... gah. Thanks for an awesome read.

That was awesome! I love the banter between the boys! Great job!

Best part - Dean running through the forest, Boo-Boo in hot pursuit, green lipstick and getting hit by the Impala, with Sam behind the wheel.

Wonderful writing, pacing, characterisation, humour, atmosphere and amazingness.

You have more stories..? you do! I am off to read!

You have great style and prose, and awesome ideas! And the boys definitely sing under your keyboard.

Was surprised though that the whole "Dean wanting to pick a fight because something was bothering him" bit was never resolved. I kept expecting that to come into play somewhere, especially since so much focus was placed on it at the beginnig - unless I missed something?

Also, I knew a lady who had lung surgery and while she had 3/4 of it removed, which is tons more severe than Dean's injury, I was shocked they were letting him out of bed in a couple of days! Eek! But I am not a doctor and they do kick you out earlier and earlier anymore. heh heh.

Anyway keep writing! Need to scrounge some more time to read more.

**“I’m missing a rib,” Dean said. “Great. Don’t fashion models have that done on purpose so they can have a longer waist?”

“You get that from watching Oprah?” Sam said.

Dean ignored him. “Did you ask for it? I wanna keep it.”

Sam blinked. How the hell did he not see that coming? “They don’t let you keep body parts, Dean, even if they’re your own.”

“Hang it from the rearview,” Dean said, staring at the ceiling. “Dude, imagine.”

“No thanks,” Sam said.**

Yes, how did same not really see that coming? Too funny. I absolutely loved this. You have such a way with these characters and your dialogue is fresh and funny and so entirely spot on that its impossible to deny. I started out being impressed with your work - I now consider myself a fan.

I am in awe of your talent. Keep up the good work. Hope to return to read more soon.

-shan

Been meaning to get to this for a while! Just loved it! You went to Port Washington! Isnt' that where some cheesy sitcom took place? With Patrick Dempsey or something? Anyway, fun references to Wisconsin, having been near or around some of them, and a Styx reference! Wow! Very cool!

I love the thought process of this story. The lighthouse was just fascinating and you pulled it all together with such ease. Although I expect nothing less from you.

Thank you for another fine example of your spectacular writing!

:D

Caroline

Man, your stuff is just so dang cool. Which sounds shallow, but really. *Cool*. The plots are always so twisty and weird and original, you totally should be scripting for the show itself.

Also, "And if it can’t then I will be the one who puts you down, and I’ll be right behind you." Too gorgeous. You've got a way of throwing such emotion in so swiftly it hits like a sucker punch.